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Written for Robert James L contest! On Mantis Celestial Madonna! Dont ask me how I did it, I watched a comic geek talk about this character on YouTube for half an hour to get into this mood! :D Hope you'll like it... 

Premiere Contest WinnerMantis, the Celestial Madonna

The sky sings soprano,
spellbound by supernova flares,
and I sigh ~ veiled in vengeance ~
pursuing cosmic conquest,
hauntingly unafraid.

I feed the vortex with vicious verses,
bleeding into leading winds,
salt-glazed passion gripping my pulse
as light rests along
midribs of merciful emerald,
feathers blooming into blue-moon rarity,
cloaking the cadence of my soul
when my heart grows heavy with its hurt.

I remain ... starved ...
of sensuous sunlight ~
to photosynthesize my sphinx spirit,
to chlorophyll my 
femme-fatale fragrance,
vowing an oath to my muse:
the steady twigs of living cosmos,
the glistening gardens
spilling across the guardians of galaxies,
kissing inked essence with searing sparks
that awaken my desire to dance
through nocturnal night
into dreaming dawns ~
an indomitable storm,
too ferocious 
for cynical hands to worship.
Still I stand ~ shameless ~
at the altar of adoration,
where love becomes a painted promise
defining the delicacy of my design.

But why does it feel like a divine curse
to perceive the tremors of time,
to taste the tears of unseen rain,
as empathy drains the empyrean
from an enlightened intellect,
and telepathic twilight trembles, 
breathless ~ blazed ~ baptized ~ 
beneath the weight 
I hold within my veins ~
for I feel every ray of darkness
d e e p e r 
than your dusk could ever behold…

O blue-rose, ethereal warmth,
I am the chosen feeler,
the zealous healer 
of wayward wanderers,
seducing the quivering thorns
of unquenched silence.
I heed what the lips 
of the eyes cannot speak.
I rise fully awake
within this celestial transformation,
where this fervent force
stays dangerously unconcerned…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Peck Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:46 PM
I just read this, and WOW! An incredible journey through elegant thoughts! Congrats on your big win!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Awn thank you beautiful soul. Appreciate your kindness truly. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 12:08 AM
Great job Ink! The trophy is yours. Your poetic prowess is impressive.
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Oh i almost missed your comment! I am so honored to receive the trophy! Thank you for introducing this, and for inspiring so many! I am grateful! Sending you light always dear Robert
George Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 9:41 PM
"I am the chosen feeler, the zealous healer of wayward wanderers, seducing the quivering thorns of unquenched silence." Sweet Empress, I don't know anything about Mantis, the celestial Madonna. I just feel that she is a cosmic figure invested with extra ordinary powers, full of empathy and feels the darkness around with pain, a benign spirit. As ever, an awesome writing. Hearty Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 1:37 PM
Awwn thank you sweet valsa! You are always so kind to me! And I truly appreciate that! Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 1:38 PM
Belated congrats, sweetie. I don't know if I can find a poem of yours I have not read in your list! I bet you are busy in other places. You are a marvel.
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Aww thank you sweet soul aunt... real life gets in the way sometimes. But I do write, privately. Not for the world. You are a marvel! Sending you light always
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 7:36 AM
Absolutely love! Writers of these movies should take note! How beautiful to throw your poetic power between the Mantis lips! Congrats and fave, dear Ink!
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Awwn thats a massive compliment dear Kim. I appreciate your feedback and congratulations. Thank you so much! Sending you light always
Onclaud Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:42 PM
such a sultry, dynamic read which is deserving of a grand win, ink...i am in awe of the fire within your lines! sweet congrats
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Awwn thank you dear Nette, I appreciate your kindness. Sending you light always
Crandall Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 3:04 PM
Wow, what a speech by The Celestial Madonna! She's got me riveted, or could it be that the Ink Empress is behind these magnificent words?
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Haha a little bit of me yes, I figured she is a lil like me ;) thank you dear David! Always good to hear from you! Sending you light always
Buhagiar Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 8:55 AM
My dear poet, your composition is absolutely magnificent. My congrats. Your alliterations, imagery and metaphors are of the highest grade. A haunting poem.
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:27 PM
So kind of you dear Victor! Thank you so much! I appreciate your support, sincerely! Sending you light always
Croft Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 2:44 AM
congratulations on such a wonderfully captivating piece!
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:28 PM
Thank you dear Karen! So sweet of you! I appreciate your presence always! Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 2:07 PM
Absolutely magnificent Poetess! "I heed what the lips of the eyes cannot speak..." Salt glazed passion gripping my pulse..." " For I feel every ray of darkness deeper than your dusk can behold..." Soulful, masterful, and enthralling work here...J.A.B. A FAV!! J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Your faves are much appreciated my dear Justin, thank you for being always so supportive and soulful! I cherish your presence. Sending you light always!
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 2:04 PM
Looks you got it done, Ink. Brilliant work. I also take at least half an hour researching these things I never heard of before. I will say congratulations early. Hahaha. Nobody will come close to beating this!
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Lolol i know what you mean. Iv heard all about the trophy winner ~ me! Lol ;) Thank you for bein a real one my sweet soul aunt! I will email you soon! Been a bit busy. Hugsziezz
DiMino Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 8:48 AM
"O blue-rose, ethereal warmth, I am the chosen feeler, the zealous healer of wayward wanderers, seducing the quivering thorns of unquenched silence." -- Wonderfully expressive and inspiring. Another great read!
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much dear Joe! Appreciate your kindness always! Sending you light always
Rodgers Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 7:14 AM
Dear Empress, O' the sheer sonic density is incredible. It feels like a storm system rolling in, thick with heavy, textured consonants and a fierce, cosmic scale, such magnitude. A praying mantis is a creature of absolute stillness, patient, and lethal precision, yet you’ve elevated her into this vast, cosmic protector. I learned quickly that deep empathy can really feel like a beautiful, exhausting weight. It’s an occupational hazard for both healers and poets this calling to "heed what the lips of the eyes cannot speak." When you open yourself up to absorb the world's hidden tremors, you end up feeling every ray of darkness at a depth that leaves you breathless. I love that your Mantis doesn't crumble under that weight. She stands "too ferocious for cynical hands to worship," transforming the hurt into a dangerous, unconcerned creative force. A creature of God FAV. Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:52 PM
Your words made my heart warm and soul smile dear Daniel, such a profound and detailed comment on my poem! Yes youv got my Mantis all figured out! You always give time and attention when reading. I will read you shortly too! Thank you tor the fave! Sending you light today and always ~
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 3:34 AM
It's a new one for me IE, I'd never heard of her but after reading your poem I'm a lot wiser. Good luck in the contest, I see a winner with this one. Tom
Empress Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 5:31 AM
Awwn, thank you, dear Tom. I think I learned too much about this character. Lol, apparently she married a walking tree! :D Quite a character! I would do the same. Always a pleasure seeing you in the comments… thank you so much.
G  Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 3:15 AM
What an opening line! This guy must have been very passionate about this character for listening to him to inspire this poetry! I see why Lioness is putting the feelers out for him lol :D I love the way you have immersed in the fan feels and tangled it with your own sensual energy and psychologist brain - a surefire win with that combination :)
Empress Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 5:35 AM
Hahah no way lioness is getting any details about the comic geek! Im quite territorial ;/ Haha i was quite fascinated seeing the enthusiasm of the comic geek. I mean… Its interesting. Haha. I do have few marvel comics! I think i have one avengers one too. But never noticed mantis! So glad that you noticed the sensual energy! :D haha! And psychologist brain awwwn! Always a pleasure seeing you in comments’ your comments are always so sincere. Thank you so much!
Onpaper Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 2:54 AM
Who the comic geek!? … he cute ?.. send me his link !!! He married?.. single ? …. Pffffft I dnt care !!! Send me his link!!! XD… salt-glazed passion gripping my pulse.. mmmm that is a gorgeous glazzze!!! as light rests along midribs of merciful emerald, mmmm thus made me soo hungry all of a sudden!!! I remain ... starved ...ayeeeee papi y u be starving!!! Lemme feed u some chimichangas!!!! kissing inked essence with searing sparks that awaken my desire to dance through nocturnal night into dreaming dawns.. yesss let’s danceee !!
Onpaper Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 6:32 AM
No one ever seems single ae!! It’s ok !! I need to find out papi!!!
Empress Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 5:36 AM
Its for me to know and for you to find out! He does seem single, in love with Mantis hahah! I think im a bit like mantis ;) lolol
Onpaper Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 2:54 AM
Lemme grab my chanklaaasssss they have shaky beads so whn dance my feet can do some chachachaaaaas !! to taste the tears of unseen rain, Mmm that line is excellent!!!for I feel every ray of darkness deeper than your dusk could ever behold…I am sure I am very much deep enough for u papi!!! Like deep need new name um that deep ae !!! I am the chosen feeler, yes you areeee ..the zealous healer mmm couldn’t agree more of wayward wanderers, yesss my body is ur wonderland papiiii !!! seducing the quivering thorns ooooo child !!! Those thorn better watch out!! You sexaaaaay piece of lava cake uuuuuu!!! Mmm !
Onpaper Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 6:33 AM
Chanklasss are sleeeepaaaaaaaaaar… in Spanish
Empress Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 5:38 AM
What on earth are chanklasss hahahhaah u are so linquistically gifted papi! Aye aye aye! Rolling hahah
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