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Sinners of sin, overdue to repent and subside, Or with the Almighty you will surely collide!

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Date: 1/18/2020 8:35:00 AM
On a collision course with oneself ...
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Date: 10/9/2019 3:04:00 PM
Clever reminder, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/10/2019 2:33:00 PM
Hi Line, just a thought that I felt I had to share! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 8/5/2019 8:03:00 PM
Quite true words of wisdom.
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Date: 8/6/2019 9:35:00 AM
A scenario which is very scary to think of if we are on the wrong side - life is so brief, over in the flash of an eye. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 8/2/2019 7:01:00 AM
Love your style of a monoku. :) Double is better than one for sure! Excellent poem!
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:37:00 AM
Hi J.W Earnings, a terrific comment, thank-you and an honour to have you visit. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/29/2019 3:26:00 PM
a truism well expressed, jen.... huggs
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Date: 7/29/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Nette, unfortunately yes it is, but will mankind take note? Hugs and blessings, Jen.
Date: 7/27/2019 10:18:00 PM
Better sell these sinners some collision insurance, eh? ---How mercenary I am; always looking to make a buck... Don't worry. I'm fully insured. LOL. … Enjoyed this one immensely, Jennifer. :) gw
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:36:00 AM
No harm in making an extra buck, remember the Almighty gave us logic also. Thanks for a great comment, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/27/2019 6:55:00 AM
yes... true..
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:32:00 AM
Hi Silent One, Absolutely! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/27/2019 4:28:00 AM
We have been taught this, yes, it is true, and in a way, we hope it will be so. Right? Write!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/28/2019 9:31:00 AM
We do hope my friend, but guess we can't presume too much, but if we can keep our slate clean, I reckon we stand a good chance. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 3:13:00 PM
- With sin as the main source ... it's power in your words, my friend Jenny :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:27:00 AM
Hope your weekend is a relaxing one - thank you dear friend for your terrific comment, Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 3:03:00 PM
Well said, Jennifer..you wrote it well.
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:25:00 AM
Hi Vijay, Hope you are enjoying your trip and thank you for your wonderful support and friendship. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 2:17:00 PM
Wow! Jennifer, What a powerful and deep write , that rings true. :-) Alexis
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Alexis - a beautiful comment, Hugs and blessings - Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 1:03:00 PM
Powerful monoku Jennifer, one day we'll all have to account for our actions good or bad. Tom
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/28/2019 9:21:00 AM
Hi Tom. we certainly will Tom, we can't all be Mother Theresa's or Saints, but as long as we not say or do harm, we might be in line for consideration. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 12:51:00 PM
Jen A powerful and most sensible reminder! Thank You Hugs, Panagiota
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Date: 7/28/2019 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota my friend, the more we see and hear it, the more we and everyone else remembers. Hugs , Jennifer.
Date: 7/26/2019 12:36:00 PM
Collide...no...subside yes...impacting monoku
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/28/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thanks for an apt comment Arturo - definitely subside! Be well, blessings, Jennifer.

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