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''Man of the Sun'' a Response To Pablo Neruda's Poem Girl Lithe and Tawny

Blithely rising in shadowy night Is Man of the Sun wearing the threshold That was once been secluded from the sight of me But together has drawn me closer to glee. As swiftly as the sun arise back in the eyes; Like morning glory bloom dash’ly under bright light My heart surrenders to Love what they called Relish days playing music of caress. But I a girl lithe and tawny still frenzied youth Settling for one hardly creep to my grasp As fresh as I hunger for pleasure Of what may World compromise that pleases the soul. Man of the Sun, sorrow not in deepest night Someone a woman be laudable of that sincere love Acquaint other who never pierces the heart For I not worth, the girl whose love blooms and withers. http://www.oocities.org/nerudapoet/lovepoems/girl.htm

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Date: 3/21/2016 9:19:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Janina. LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:25:00 PM
Janina, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:11:00 PM
Janina,, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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