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'man Mars Mars

Searching, searching for the core,
to be the root, center stage, on we bore.

To see mankind as the son 
all around which all universes run.

Look to Venus, look to Mars
it's man’s face there on the moons in the stars?

Personify, God’s creations
do humans deserve such elevation?

The Man or Sphinx, on Moon, Mars
well perhaps it’s Woman who’s gone so far? 

I'm sure it’s man’s invention
leading us to this egocentric creation.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/23/2010 5:52:00 AM Congratulations Deborah for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2010 9:27:00 PM PRobably you are right, Deb. Great observation in this winning poem. Congrats. Luv, Andrea/ ps. I just remembered I don't think I said congrats for the PFT win, did I? YOu deserved that!! Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 9/22/2010 9:14:00 PM Many congratulations on this win. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/22/2010 4:45:00 PM Congratulations Debbie on your #8, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/22/2010 3:34:00 PM I like this one a lot. congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/22/2010 2:45:00 PM Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Debbie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/22/2010 1:37:00 PM Congrats Debbie on your big win in this contest.. a wonderful write.. enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/22/2010 11:18:00 AM Interesting concepts concerning man's egocentricities, Deborah. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kevin Semeniuk Date: 9/21/2010 6:43:00 PM wow! great poem! Login to Reply

Thvia Shetley Date: 9/20/2010 9:27:00 PM very nicely done! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/20/2010 5:51:00 PM aaah, perhaps its woman, yes indeed, perhaps its woman and not a man at all.. well done, Deborah, and thanks for your comment on my poem about doves, oh Debs, the difference between doves and gulls, is like night and day~~ Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/20/2010 4:49:00 PM Hey, why couldn't it be the face of a chimpazee! Like in planet of the apes? Or 2001 Space Oddessy? Login to Reply

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson Date: 9/20/2010 3:41:00 PM Lots to think about right? That's what poetry is all about I think. Have a great day! Scarlett Login to Reply

Chuck Keys Date: 9/20/2010 6:11:00 AM great thoughts expressed greatly. and now you made me think ... thank you, chuck Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/19/2010 9:21:00 PM What a thought provoking words you have sketched here in this deep and lovely poem. I fully agree with you 'do we deserve such elevation?' And the most beautifully concluded 'to such egocentric creation'. It's Gem of a Poem. Besides, after reading your Blog Onam/India I completed my Rangoli or the colorful poetry on floor and am posting two of these writes. Hope you would like them. Thank you for all the inspiration I got from you. Love and best wishes..Ravindra..Deborah Guzzi Login to Reply

Sidney Beck Date: 9/18/2010 12:26:00 PM Dear Deb Thanks for your suggestion about "healing" etc The simple fact is that I have no idea what the actual topic is for the contest...I am unable to navigate through the system in POETRY SOUP and cannot find the topic......can you enlighten me? and please show me how to find this important but hidden data in future....thanks I am sorry to keep on bugging you Syd Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/18/2010 7:24:00 AM DEEP! I've tortured my old brain for many years over the issue of whether God is the All-in-All, which includes man who then becomes a part of God. Is man God like? Social situations would seem to contradict. Geat write, Debbie. Dave Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 9/18/2010 6:59:00 AM now this is a way to ook at it deb I did research on it and what I read blew me away enjoyed the read and further knowledge with the outcome to this one gl in contest also thanks a million for your kind comments to my works I will be back to hit ya up again me only have 7 more pages to return the views lol keep up the great work always here on the soup blessings Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/17/2010 7:43:00 PM Good way to call it, Deb!! Hey, I came to tell you something. Did you know Daver did a poem citing your name in it? It's cute. Go see it. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 9/17/2010 7:17:00 PM Yeah, it was definitly the last line. I checked the net for pictures. The last one definitely showed in three D that it is a mesa. Good poem. Charles Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/17/2010 2:16:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this revealing write..Reads like a winners' circle write to me..Glad that I chose this one to read this evening..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/17/2010 1:34:00 PM The sun runs around so many universes and there are many suns than we think of as there more stars than we can think of. Very intellectual write, Debbie Login to Reply

Cas Davis Date: 9/17/2010 9:18:00 AM I FREAKIN' LUV IT! U spanka my language! 8^)) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/17/2010 7:17:00 AM :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Deborah! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 9/17/2010 7:03:00 AM Explorative ... I see ... perhaps in imagination, how we came to be ... the center of our own creativity. There are some search far from the eyes, when we search with faith we open unopened gates. Login to Reply