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'man Mars Mars

Searching, searching for the core, to be the root, center stage, on we bore. To see mankind as the son all around which all universes run. Look to Venus, look to Mars it's man’s face there on the moons in the stars? Personify, God’s creations do humans deserve such elevation? The Man or Sphinx, on Moon, Mars well perhaps it’s Woman who’s gone so far? I'm sure it’s man’s invention leading us to this egocentric creation.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2010 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations Deborah for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2010 9:27:00 PM

PRobably you are right, Deb. Great observation in this winning poem. Congrats. Luv, Andrea/ ps. I just remembered I don't think I said congrats for the PFT win, did I? YOu deserved that!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/22/2010 9:14:00 PM

Many congratulations on this win.

John Freeman

Date: 9/22/2010 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie on your #8, Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/22/2010 3:34:00 PM

I like this one a lot. congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2010 2:45:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Debbie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2010 1:37:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your big win in this contest.. a wonderful write.. enjoy with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 11:18:00 AM

Interesting concepts concerning man's egocentricities, Deborah. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 9/21/2010 6:43:00 PM

wow! great poem!

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/20/2010 9:27:00 PM

very nicely done!

Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2010 5:51:00 PM

aaah, perhaps its woman, yes indeed, perhaps its woman and not a man at all.. well done, Deborah, and thanks for your comment on my poem about doves, oh Debs, the difference between doves and gulls, is like night and day~~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/20/2010 4:49:00 PM

Hey, why couldn't it be the face of a chimpazee! Like in planet of the apes? Or 2001 Space Oddessy?

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 9/20/2010 3:41:00 PM

Lots to think about right? That's what poetry is all about I think. Have a great day! Scarlett

Chuck Keys

Date: 9/20/2010 6:11:00 AM

great thoughts expressed greatly. and now you made me think ... thank you, chuck

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/19/2010 9:21:00 PM

What a thought provoking words you have sketched here in this deep and lovely poem. I fully agree with you 'do we deserve such elevation?' And the most beautifully concluded 'to such egocentric creation'. It's Gem of a Poem. Besides, after reading your Blog Onam/India I completed my Rangoli or the colorful poetry on floor and am posting two of these writes. Hope you would like them. Thank you for all the inspiration I got from you. Love and best wishes..Ravindra..Deborah Guzzi

Sidney Beck

Date: 9/18/2010 12:26:00 PM

Dear Deb Thanks for your suggestion about "healing" etc The simple fact is that I have no idea what the actual topic is for the contest...I am unable to navigate through the system in POETRY SOUP and cannot find the topic......can you enlighten me? and please show me how to find this important but hidden data in future....thanks I am sorry to keep on bugging you Syd

Daver Austin

Date: 9/18/2010 7:24:00 AM

DEEP! I've tortured my old brain for many years over the issue of whether God is the All-in-All, which includes man who then becomes a part of God. Is man God like? Social situations would seem to contradict. Geat write, Debbie. Dave

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/18/2010 6:59:00 AM

now this is a way to ook at it deb I did research on it and what I read blew me away enjoyed the read and further knowledge with the outcome to this one gl in contest also thanks a million for your kind comments to my works I will be back to hit ya up again me only have 7 more pages to return the views lol keep up the great work always here on the soup blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2010 7:43:00 PM

Good way to call it, Deb!! Hey, I came to tell you something. Did you know Daver did a poem citing your name in it? It's cute. Go see it. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/17/2010 7:17:00 PM

Yeah, it was definitly the last line. I checked the net for pictures. The last one definitely showed in three D that it is a mesa. Good poem. Charles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2010 2:16:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this revealing write..Reads like a winners' circle write to me..Glad that I chose this one to read this evening..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 1:34:00 PM

The sun runs around so many universes and there are many suns than we think of as there more stars than we can think of. Very intellectual write, Debbie

Cas Davis

Date: 9/17/2010 9:18:00 AM

I FREAKIN' LUV IT! U spanka my language! 8^))

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2010 7:17:00 AM

:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Deborah! Love, Carolyn

David Smalling

Date: 9/17/2010 7:03:00 AM

Explorative ... I see ... perhaps in imagination, how we came to be ... the center of our own creativity. There are some search far from the eyes, when we search with faith we open unopened gates.