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Just in time for Halloween... my song about to publish, already testing on Tik Tok. 

You know you like being consumed!! 

 

- Artimus 

 

 


[Instrumental solo]

[Intro][Female Vocals]  
 
I am a man eater
free to admit
I do it piece by piece till you submit
I start out with wit
and I follow on with my sexy bits

[Chorus][Female Vocals]  
I can get you going
(really smokin)
get you on that edge
white knuckle time to dread!
is she really joking?
My god she is smokin
You want to know more?
Come find me again!


[Verse 1] [Female Vocals]  
I am a man eater 
Here to pick your brain!
Hang on your every word
Make you half insane!
I am a man eater
I snack on you bit by bit
It gets you really jumping
as I put on the wit
How can you sit
As I put on a show! 

[Drop] [Female Vocals]  

Bu bu bu but but but but
whut whut whut what what what what?!
You said you do the wuzit
Oh my gosh the thingy does it !  
Now your doomed!
OH MY GAWD can you get on cam?
Where are you again? 
OH YES OH MAAM!
Sign me up! You say
Cause in my D Ms you want to stay
This type of show should never go away
HOLY COW she said it!
Can you record it? for reddit?! 
OH NO there I really said it!

[Musical Interlude]

[Verse 2]  
We talk all dirty 
and tell those really raunchy stories  
Artimus, in all her glory  
and you share your best

[Chorus]  
I can get you going
(really smokin)
get you on that edge
white knuckle time to dread!
is she really joking?
My god she is smokin
You want to know more?
Come find me again!

[Verse 3] [Female Vocals]  
Holy cow that was a trip you say  
We time warped the evening away  
kind of a mind f*ck you see
but you have a perma smile on your face again

[Drop] [Female Vocals]  
I am a man eater
oh yeah I am
I eat you piece by piece as I can
Suck you in with each bite
chew on your parts just so right
You can't hold out on me
Cause I am your chat fantasy
Oh I am a man eater you see
Typing out what you want to see


[Outro] [Female Vocals]  
Find me find me find me in chat
I never leave you feel flat
I am a man eater you see
suck your mind dry instead

You will have a good time 

It will lead to down time

crave more I give good brain you see! 

so come to me!

[Drop] [Female Vocals]  

Bu bu bu but but but but
whut whut whut what what what what?!
You said you do the wuzit
Oh my gosh the thingy doesit !  
Now your doomed!
OH MY GAWD can you get on cam?
Where are you again? 
What brain you see?

so come to me!

[solo]
[instrumental]
[Fade to End]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/1/2024 9:44:00 AM
Dear Susan, Your lyrics are oh-so provocative and playful. They truly capture the allure of online flirtation with fantastic imagery and clever wordplay. Then, the rhythmic structure and repetitive elements create a catchy, memorable piece reflecting the addictive nature of online connections. I think your work cleverly dissects modern communication and desire. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Susan Manley
Date: 11/2/2024 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I was on a tear. Many speculate about me and so I put on a show with the song. :D In truth I have been online running around in one form or another since the early 80s in dial up systems. And so I poured some passion, my poetic self and my experience through in that song. I have had many adventures online and met many people virtually and in person
Date: 10/31/2024 7:38:00 PM
Love it! Great beat, melody and composition! Did you sing?
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Susan Manley
Date: 11/1/2024 4:29:00 AM
No thats AI again. I still sing a bit, but its not as common. I just don't go to Karaoke... I went last week and some one stepped on my foot LOL ( no thanks.. ) anywho... I am just working away on the music and publication.

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