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Just in time for Halloween... my song about to publish, already testing on Tik Tok. 

You know you like being consumed!! 

 

- Artimus 

 

 

[Instrumental solo] [Intro][Female Vocals] I am a man eater free to admit I do it piece by piece till you submit I start out with wit and I follow on with my sexy bits [Chorus][Female Vocals] I can get you going (really smokin) get you on that edge white knuckle time to dread! is she really joking? My god she is smokin You want to know more? Come find me again! [Verse 1] [Female Vocals] I am a man eater Here to pick your brain! Hang on your every word Make you half insane! I am a man eater I snack on you bit by bit It gets you really jumping as I put on the wit How can you sit As I put on a show! [Drop] [Female Vocals] Bu bu bu but but but but whut whut whut what what what what?! You said you do the wuzit Oh my gosh the thingy does it ! Now your doomed! OH MY GAWD can you get on cam? Where are you again? OH YES OH MAAM! Sign me up! You say Cause in my D Ms you want to stay This type of show should never go away HOLY COW she said it! Can you record it? for reddit?! OH NO there I really said it! [Musical Interlude] [Verse 2] We talk all dirty and tell those really raunchy stories Artimus, in all her glory and you share your best [Chorus] I can get you going (really smokin) get you on that edge white knuckle time to dread! is she really joking? My god she is smokin You want to know more? Come find me again! [Verse 3] [Female Vocals] Holy cow that was a trip you say We time warped the evening away kind of a mind f*ck you see but you have a perma smile on your face again [Drop] [Female Vocals] I am a man eater oh yeah I am I eat you piece by piece as I can Suck you in with each bite chew on your parts just so right You can't hold out on me Cause I am your chat fantasy Oh I am a man eater you see Typing out what you want to see [Outro] [Female Vocals] Find me find me find me in chat I never leave you feel flat I am a man eater you see suck your mind dry instead You will have a good time It will lead to down time crave more I give good brain you see! so come to me! [Drop] [Female Vocals] Bu bu bu but but but but whut whut whut what what what what?! You said you do the wuzit Oh my gosh the thingy doesit ! Now your doomed! OH MY GAWD can you get on cam? Where are you again? What brain you see? so come to me! [solo] [instrumental] [Fade to End]

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Date: 11/1/2024 9:44:00 AM
Dear Susan, Your lyrics are oh-so provocative and playful. They truly capture the allure of online flirtation with fantastic imagery and clever wordplay. Then, the rhythmic structure and repetitive elements create a catchy, memorable piece reflecting the addictive nature of online connections. I think your work cleverly dissects modern communication and desire. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Susan Manley
Date: 11/2/2024 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I was on a tear. Many speculate about me and so I put on a show with the song. :D In truth I have been online running around in one form or another since the early 80s in dial up systems. And so I poured some passion, my poetic self and my experience through in that song. I have had many adventures online and met many people virtually and in person
Date: 10/31/2024 7:38:00 PM
Love it! Great beat, melody and composition! Did you sing?
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Susan Manley
Date: 11/1/2024 4:29:00 AM
No thats AI again. I still sing a bit, but its not as common. I just don't go to Karaoke... I went last week and some one stepped on my foot LOL ( no thanks.. ) anywho... I am just working away on the music and publication.

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