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Man Canned Tableau

Man Canned Tableau Insult as men stare, More frequent than rare, Holding Partners hand Passerby, he's canned, Boobs, bottoms or legs, Stop it now she begs! PHOTO 3 Entering Contest " Tableau 2 Poetry Contest" Sponsor: Joseph May 27th March 2021

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 4/11/2021 11:45:00 AM

Fine write Jenni.. You did bring that pic to life.

Phred Sirikye

Date: 4/10/2021 2:17:00 AM

As though you wrote about my thoughts everytime I am out with friends.. nice one. ~Phred

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/10/2021 11:26:00 AM

Hi Phred, It must get very annoying and why even bother asking a lady friend out if that is what he does all the time! Thanks for a lovely comment, Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Angela Crabtree

Date: 4/9/2021 6:23:00 PM

Back to read this masterpiece again, Jennifer. Hope you have a wonderful weekend :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/10/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Angela, what a lovely comment, hope you are having a great weekend also. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 9:34:00 PM

look I am commenting here again as a test. Can you see this? I can see my comments from you. So if you see this, it means neither of us has blocked the other!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/5/2021 11:26:00 PM

Hi Andrea, yes I can see it - I'm so glad , so all is good. These things happen so quickly and unintentionally. Yay! Hugs Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/5/2021 2:42:00 PM

That hasn't happened to me in a long time, but I don't miss it! Very astute write!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/10/2021 11:30:00 AM

No it is really horrible, you feel like leaving and going home. Thanks Michelle, great comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/5/2021 12:05:00 PM

I had that experience long ago when I was seventeen and with my first lady friend. You have written this quite well.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/3/2021 10:19:00 AM

Well said Jennifer. I've was out with a guy like that once. I was young and turned the tables on him. I told him it was okay for him to look at other girls. I was looking at other guys. Love this. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. Praise The Lord! He Is Risen! JB

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/3/2021 3:32:00 AM

This is such a nice entry my dear friend... It's a sad situation holding partner's hand and staring another beauty... I didn't see the winner's list, but I hope this did win. Am not getting much time for Soup Jenni, maybe after some more days, I'll catch up... Have a sweet day dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2021 7:22:00 PM

One of the best entries Jennifer, you surely have a way of bringing a picture to life, then enhance it even more...Hope you are well dear lady.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2021 1:41:00 PM

Well, sad that a man would look at another woman while holding his wife or girlfriend's hand. Creative entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:28:00 PM

good one. I chose that picture too!! Congrats, sweetie.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2021 10:20:00 AM

I see we have a winner. Congrats and a big hug.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/2/2021 9:16:00 AM

Certainly, it is an impressive win, dearest Jennifer! Congratulation on such outstanding writing! Blessings

Angela Crabtree

Date: 4/1/2021 3:36:00 PM

It's definitely an uncomfortable feeling when in that situation. Great poem, Jennifer. Hope you have a great night :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:44:00 PM

Great imagery, Jennifer, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 2:52:00 PM

Great interpretation of the picture, Jennifer! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 9:31:00 AM

Back with congratulations my friend. Well done. So happy to see it on the winners list! A great lesson for guys with wandering eyes and the effect it has on the ones they profess to love! All the best. Sending you blessings of Holy Week!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/31/2021 11:40:00 AM

Thank-you Sam, such a kind sweet comment - we had so called friends, a couple, and he was the biggest womanizer i have ever seen, the compliments and looks he gave me and any woman within his gaze space were quite appalling. Blessings to you also Sam we celebrate Easter in May Easter Sunday being the 2nd May (we are Greek Orthodox and go according to the Julian Calendar as do the Russians and Eastern Europe whereas Christians all over the Western world go according to the Gregorian Calendar. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:11:00 AM

It's the dog house for him, Congrats on your win Jennifer,

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/31/2021 11:25:00 AM

Hi Joseph, you made my day, I confused Tableau 1 with Tableau 2 and when I looked at Tableau 1 (which I didn't even enter,) I did not see my name on on the contest judged sheet I figured, oh well I didn't make it, however, when going into the winners list of Tableau 2 and saw my name, realized I had made an error - thanks Joseph I was thrilled when I realized my mistake and saw my win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/28/2021 9:10:00 PM

Hello Jennifer ... the world is full of these blokes leering their way through the days - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2021 11:45:00 AM

Unfortunately my friend Lindsay you are right - they don't realize how they hurt their girlfriends, partners fiances or wives - it is an addiction I would say! Thank you for a great comment, hope you are all well. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2021 2:19:00 PM

OH HO!! I see you chose the same picture as I did. That was sure a fun one to do. Good on you, jennifer!!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/31/2021 12:02:00 PM

Hey Andrea, I think it was because I was stressed for a few weeks, but I thought I had entered contest one (which I never did) and only realized my mistake today when I saw I was a winner in Tableau 2 Hugs, Jenn.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2021 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Andrea and wonderful that you got a top win really awesome, I enjoyed it but it didn't score at all this time, it was a fun contest though. Hugs, Jennifer.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/28/2021 1:27:00 PM

Hmmmmm It's awful to have to walk past a construction site. Now I'm an old lady but when young I would avoid it. Good job here. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2021 11:39:00 AM

So right you are. I was 19 years old and after having graduated (Matric as we say) at High school, went to learn Shorthand and typing, we used to finish at 2.30 and on my way home I used to stop by the village pool mainly to suntan - we did not know the dangers then. I left at about 4.15 and was chased and followed block by block by a blue car, he cut me off and spoke to me in English and Afrikaans, he knew I was Greek and who I was and my comings and goings, I will leave you in suspense as I am going to write a poem about it. Blessings Judy, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/28/2021 12:46:00 PM

Some men need manners.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/31/2021 11:52:00 AM

So right you are, so right you be, I see you are too wise for me. A syaing we puto auto

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2021 7:58:00 AM

good one! I chose this theme I've not posted it yet:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/31/2021 11:58:00 AM

I made a huge error, for some reason I looked at Tableau l (which I didn't even enter, and the noticed my name on Joseph's judged contest page and saw I was one of the winners - I have started to eventually come right, a very stressful period in my life) Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2021 11:12:00 AM

The content closed Jan but my poem was not featured. Thanks for a great comment - all the best always, hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2021 4:10:00 AM

You speak for her, Jennifer. I like your interpretation of the photo. All the best.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/28/2021 4:43:00 AM

Thank-you Vijay for your lovely comment and your best wishes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/27/2021 10:02:00 AM

Very clever take on the contest prompt! Men's wandering eyes do get them into trouble - for centuries! This is filled with such wise observation Jennifer. Best of wishes for the contest. Blessings and a hug! Hope you are doing well.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/31/2021 9:35:00 AM

Elias sounds like a wonderful husband and soulmate. What a blessing that you two found one another after your experience with your first husband. God is good. Your marriage now is a beautiful example of a nurturing marriage. Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/28/2021 12:18:00 AM

Hi Sam, This is my 2nd marriage of 20 years now and I have a loving, wonderful husband. My ex husband was one of the types my poem is about of. Eventually I refused to go out to dinner because he was not with me in mind, just trying to catch women's eyes so he could flirt. That was only one of his faults, there were others, but that is History now. Thank-you for commenting my friend, a thoughtful answer, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.