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When the energy of love dulls the longing for decay, the earth is at peace. By Poet
Welkin' yarns require seer tears to slump I sought the draped orb for aid by a glance Adam will gnaw rite apples, yet scorn stump Bitter truth was rousing in a harsh trance Cyclone wreaked havoc; made him prance and dance! I'm snared in a trap of rough arms that's deep Through vague shrubbery my gazes, they sweep; Gray decay is dry stash of flawed niceness Moth mouth sang a sonnet, as slant wolves weep But trust fulfills the most swaddled calmness.
1st Place Contest Winner Written: February 1st, 2022 D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/15/2022 11:42:00 PM
Back with my compliments, Lasaad, for your 1st Place winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!
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Date: 2/15/2022 8:59:00 PM
So dramatic and compelling, Lasaad, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 2/15/2022 4:58:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, Good content and imagery. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2022 10:06:00 AM
Amazing images and poetic lines Lasaad. This dizain has an innate power and impact! Congratulations on your win! Love the use of the creative use of the word "welkin!" Blessings of peace to you my friend!
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Date: 2/15/2022 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!! What an write/Quote and pictures. Your creativity was working overtime. Have a blessed day............
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Your imagery a photo in motion. :)Paulette
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Date: 2/14/2022 3:00:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent poem, I love your images and your quote ~ Constance
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, dear Constance. I appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me.
Date: 2/2/2022 2:35:00 AM
Magical write you've appropriated here, Lasaad, and unsurpassed rhyming will keep the many at bay my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 2/1/2022 5:40:00 PM
Very carefully chosen words to convey the meaning and essence of the poem and also conforming to the Dizain form. Well done Lasaad !
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Date: 2/1/2022 12:55:00 PM
You did a wonderful job on your Dizain Lasaad. I find this form a challenge. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/1/2022 12:29:00 PM
The trick of the dizain is the rhyming. I find it difficult. Yours excel.
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Date: 2/1/2022 11:53:00 AM
Outstanding writing! Excellent Dizain, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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