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Man Architect of Decay

Quote: When the energy of love dulls the longing for decay, the earth is at peace. By Poet


Welkin' yarns require seer tears to slump  
I sought the draped orb for aid by a glance
Adam will gnaw rite apples, yet scorn stump
Bitter truth was rousing in a harsh trance
Cyclone wreaked havoc; made him prance and dance! 
I'm snared in a trap of rough arms that's deep
Through vague shrubbery my gazes, they sweep; 
Gray decay is dry stash of flawed niceness
Moth mouth sang a sonnet, as slant wolves weep
But trust fulfills the most swaddled calmness.

1st Place Contest Winner

Written: February 1st, 2022

D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2022 at 11:42 PM Back with my compliments, Lasaad, for your 1st Place winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Michelle Faulkner February 15, 2022 at 8:59 PM So dramatic and compelling, Lasaad, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Alexis Y. February 15, 2022 at 4:58 PM Hi Lasaad, Good content and imagery. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day-Alexis

Sam Kauffman February 15, 2022 at 10:06 AM Amazing images and poetic lines Lasaad. This dizain has an innate power and impact! Congratulations on your win! Love the use of the creative use of the word "welkin!" Blessings of peace to you my friend!

Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 8:22 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!! What an write/Quote and pictures. Your creativity was working overtime. Have a blessed day............

Paulette Calasibetta February 14, 2022 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Your imagery a photo in motion. :)Paulette

Constance La France February 14, 2022 at 3:00 PM Lasaad, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent poem, I love your images and your quote ~ Constance Sotto Poet February 14, 2022 at 5:10 PM Thank you very much, dear Constance. I appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me.

William Kelii Kekaula February 2, 2022 at 2:35 AM Magical write you've appropriated here, Lasaad, and unsurpassed rhyming will keep the many at bay my friend, Aloha!

Valsa George February 1, 2022 at 5:40 PM Very carefully chosen words to convey the meaning and essence of the poem and also conforming to the Dizain form. Well done Lasaad !

Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 12:55 PM You did a wonderful job on your Dizain Lasaad. I find this form a challenge. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings xxoo

Victor Buhagiar February 1, 2022 at 12:29 PM The trick of the dizain is the rhyming. I find it difficult. Yours excel.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 1, 2022 at 11:53 AM Outstanding writing! Excellent Dizain, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.