Man-I-Cure

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2018 it is this year and 100 years since WWI ended...

This poem was written for the contest 'Bring Me Back To life".

 

Man-I-Cure

It is 1918 and feet from the trenches require a shake up
Rotting and drenched by blood across enemy lines they
Shout ‘Peace’ and ‘This was the War to end all of the Wars’

A pedicure that is although amputated limbs have been
Discarded by the wheel barrow have found a gravesite even
Though not all are buried alongside their own bodies attached

Does a soldier’s cross rest upon limbo or on ultimate reprieve?

Faces blown into pieces require no makeup when cerebral
Matter has vanished alongside with reason a shot in the dark

Fortunate ones have their wedding rings taken from lonely fingers
Sent home as a message of a final farewell to weapons and arms

Bewildered by chemical distortion some blind are leading the blind
As they march quietly back from the front to an uncertain future

Who won this battle with whom was it lost and for what purpose?

In the mascara parlour of gas masks floating on poisonous vile air Egos
Require treatment as modern warfare rages on in contempt of mankind

Will a ‘Man-I-Cure’ ever be more than a cover up for assault on our strife?

14th April 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/15/2018 11:31:00 AM
Sadly, the simple truth has been known for the longest time. World Wars will be around until the war inside each of us is over. We are all Siamese Twins, joined together at the hips, hearts, and souls. What affects one affects the other--there is no escaping. Great write, leading to deeper understanding of Human Consciousness and Free Will (the most misunderstood concepts of all).
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