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Mama's Mad

Mama's Mad That woman there is my mama Make her mad means certain trauma With deadly aim Your butt she'll claim Its all part of mama's drama! Taken from the phrase.. If mama's not happy, nobody's happy! For Joe's contest.

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Des Juan Richardson

Date: 10/15/2010 6:27:00 AM

This reminds so much of my "mama!" Love it. Thank you for your comment on my poetry. They are very much welcomed. ~Des Juan~

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/13/2010 2:30:00 PM

Loved this one it was so true.Thanks so much for the congrats on my win.Teresa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 10:37:00 PM

VERY CUTE. I am loving these poems based on the funny expressions like this one. Congratulations, dear Barbara!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Joe Flach's contest "In Other Words". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/3/2010 7:53:00 PM

Great limerick and great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/3/2010 5:46:00 PM

lol, I know that saying , congrats on your HM

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/3/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the win for this nice write, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2010 4:04:00 PM

Congrats BG on your HM in Joe's contest.. a wonderful write and win ..enjoy your special honor today.. safe and happy weekend with luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/17/2010 7:15:00 PM

heee ha...just love these limericks. Love this funny one also BG. Great job for the contest. Good fortune to you.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 8/17/2010 5:17:00 PM

I could see Ethel Waters or Louise Beavers shouting this and then throwing Mickey Rooney or James Stewart out of the house. NOw I'm showing my age. Too much TCM, I guess. Nicely rhymned 3&4. Thank you as always. Gerard.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2010 1:42:00 AM

enjoyed this limerick Barbara, good luck in the contest. Harry

Tom Mcmurray

Date: 8/16/2010 6:57:00 PM

This was a well executed and very enjoyable limerick Barbara. Loved the final line. A very creative effort. tom

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 6:28:00 PM

A nice write for the contest. enjoyed it. Good luck

Shirley Bracken

Date: 8/16/2010 5:47:00 PM

Excellent poem. I think that's the way it is in everyones house! best of luck in the contest, Shirley

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2010 4:08:00 PM

That's surely the way it was in our house, LNC. Mama's drama caused a lot of trauma. Great take on the key phrase. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn (did you get my email?)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2010 1:58:00 PM

good luck inthe contest,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/16/2010 11:47:00 AM

Enjoyed your limerick Barbara, all the best for the contest, love Wilma