Mama's Kiss Goodbye

In Winter’s cold, on chill of air
                      Remains a frozen memory
A boy of eight, the streets of ice
                      To glide my path to school

The baker’s door of frosted pane
                    A beacon in its glacial glow
Would guide my footsteps fervently  
                   To score a “Chocolate Twist”

The scurry of my frigid toes
                   To find my way to breakfast
Informed that I was ready
                            To brave another day

The working class of childhood days
                            Allowed no fancy cars
A frosty morn had faithful hope
                        The boiler would survive

I ask myself why thoughts abide
                So sweetly of this bitter scene
It was the love, that warmed my heart,
                         In Mama’s kiss goodbye

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Date: 8/1/2024 1:42:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful poem. What a great memory.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2024 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Victor!!
Date: 7/31/2024 7:40:00 PM
Such a sweet piece of nostalgia, Mike. Seems likes soooooo long ago, doesn't it? Hard to believe that our lives span such different eras. Here's to you, brother. Cheers, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2024 4:05:00 AM
Cheers, Gershon, Thank you1
Date: 7/31/2024 1:28:00 PM
this is so precious. I love the formatting of it too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea xxoo
Date: 7/31/2024 12:44:00 PM
“A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness.” — Robert Frost. Your poetry is classic and should be among the giants, Mike ~xhugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2024 6:09:00 PM
Anaya, thank you for such a lovely compliment xxoo
Date: 7/31/2024 12:06:00 PM
Who needs lots of stuff if you're blessed with maternal love? Nice one
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2024 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Tom!!
Date: 7/31/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Mike, Oh such memories you have of your mom. something to remember. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/1/2024 5:16:00 AM
Hello Mike, You are welcome. I hope you are enjoying the summer. Happy Thursday. xxxx-oooo. /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Darlene xxoo
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