Mamas Discourse About the Sea

O children how beautiful the sea
with its white foam clouds,
its turquoise blooms,
its kiddish push’n pull,
its whirlpool, its briny drink…

salt like liquor — be careful of
where the sun beats you red.
…the brothel of the sea
don’t look for its meaning
…just mind me - stay away from
sirens and ethereal rocks.

O children take your pails
build your fairy castles,
fill your moats, until
it gets dark…when crabs
cut loose from the sand
and gigantic jaws comb the surf.

take your boats in hand,
wear your orange vest
in daylight, where the blue
kicks your boat playfully,
and like a friend, the waves shake
the hands of your oars.

be wary of shadows prevailing
upon the tendril waves, creeping,
daring to persuade you out
…just a little further…turns you about -
stows away the bread and buttery sun.

Sleep soundly in your cave,
under your sea-scented quilt.
remember mama always told you
…don’t turn your back on the deep.

3/4/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Gracious writing. You did well.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 10:30 AM
An amazing tale, and you chose all the right words to make it super delicious to read.
Leiser Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 9:01 PM
What an intriguing and imaginative story you tell, Kim! Filled with suspense and creative imagery, too. Love it! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Wolf Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 7:56 PM
Just the right touch of danger lurking in this playful poem, Kim. Very nice! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Gibson Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 5:58 PM
I love the images, Kim; especially the waves shaking the hands of the oars. Thanks for your visit.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, Faye!
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Kim, I enjoyed your story. Blessings ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Woodrow Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:17 PM
love it! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
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