Malimar

Inhaling, hushed, from hashed cigars
    my mind implodes in Malimar
        where Naiads bathe in caviar -
            I dream of dwarves and three-eyed tsars.

 The captive kiss of Princess Mars
    (who talks in tongues at seminars)
        burns red beyond Her blue boudoir -
            I writhe within Her pale peignoir.

Her Maids gloss lips with cinnabar,
    bedizen cheeks in dusts that mar,
        serve teas beside the reservoir -
            I sip them from a samovar.

Disguised in smoke and lamps of spar
    Her Genies gender gold dinars,
        evoking flames in ginger jars -
            I plea before the Commissar.

At Princess’ neighbourhood bazaar,
    white shadows slip through doors ajar
        to drape my dreams in ash and char -
            I long await the Avatar.

Her Merchants (preening, proud Hussars)
    paint pretty scenes on VCR’s
        while sailing ships to Zanzibar -
            I strum the strings of warped sitars.

Her Prophets sometimes cruise in cars
    else while at each and every bar
        to speak of space and time bizarre -
            I pass my pride for small pourboires.

Her Necromancers trace in tar
    tall tales of wisdom flung afar,
        transported by the Registrars -
            I hitchhike on their handlebars.

Her seers conjure repertoires
    where She and I are on a par
         in infinite surreal memoirs -
             I sometimes sense the void is ours.

My Princess never sees the scars
    cut by Her whispered “au revoirs” -
        I often wake to ask ‘who are
            these Gods that sail the distant stars?’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Great monorhyme and definitely absurd. Like it. Congratulations Terry! :-)
Krampe Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Wow - how you pulled of that monorhyme! Masterful! Congrats on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:01 AM
I've sponsored some monorhyme contests lately, and it's difficult for most to come up with 12 rhymes that don't sound or feel forced somehow. You managed 40 yet the flow was perfect and not one felt forced, this is indeed a masterclass of monorhyme. Well done sir!
Neumann Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Brilliant. The flow, the sound when I read and the characters all wrapped up so lightly and gently in all the meaning. Congratulations, Kai
Johnson Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 8:10 PM
cant beat them rhymes, for sure sublime, well done here old mate....
Posey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Terry, a lot can be learned about monorhymes by examining this textbook example. Beautiful job.... Jake
Chircop Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:10 PM
rerading this beautifully crafted poem Terry
Chircop Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:10 PM
rereading i meant..oops
Cavanaugh Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 4:49 AM
What an incredible poem Terry. From Malimar to distant stars you have weaved a treasure of a poem here. Bravo!
Chircop Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 7:20 AM
This flows so light and beautiful on the heart Terry..Sometimes i do wonder too who are these gods that sail the distant stars. .
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 4:15 PM
enjoying this again, my friend. Awesome
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Great imagination, rhyme and rhythm in this one..Enjoyed reading your creative lines this morn..Thanks for the visit to my Limerick..They are not so easy for me to write..Sara
Ryerson Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 4:44 PM
I am amazed that you have managed to come up with not only monorhymes, but monorhymes with two and three syllables in this dreamy fantasy!...Totally enchanting,Terry...I am in awe...
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:26 PM
wow that is some monorhyming you got going on and great rhythm as well. Very cool and unique.
Mac Donald Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Oh, love this piece, Terry!:) Amazing imagery and metaphor...what a ride this poem is. "When pink opossums come to spar", feels like 'Wonderland'. So very clever! I haven't been writing much...dream some, think more, until reality swerves its angry head. Oh well....great tidings to you, Terry! Mikki
Horne Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 3:18 PM
awesome, as ever, Terry
Comporozos Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Nice poem full of 'strange' vocabulary amazing the reader...
Horsman Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 2:15 PM
as usual your poetry takes one on a journey, one which never fails to amaze...
Beaufort Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:53 PM
Terry, you have so much talent displayed here. All the rhyming words that weave ancient and modern worlds together are just fantastic. It reads like a wonderful dream. I am in awe.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:31 AM
Terry, a very pleasant poem to read - written so interesting and well. - Beautiful work! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:41 AM
hi terry, looking forwrd to a new one..:) huggs
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 3:15 PM
clever and entertaining as ever, my friend - love it
Gooden Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Love your word play, Terry.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:45 AM
A mesmerizing subject magnetizing the mind and challenging language skills! Beautifully written! Thank You!
Ryerson Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Gotta agree with some of the below comments, Terry...I'm from Earth and you're from Mars or a distant star...Stunning and compelling poem nonetheless...You are equipped with a VERY sensitive antennae my friend!..TEN verses in flawless monorhyme? WOW...
De Burca Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 1:17 PM
A fine poem, excellent rhythm and rhyme, blending culture's and language.
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