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Malibu Sunset

Just like a slowly rolling tide
A jet trail sails across the sky
Drifting past the shell-shaped moon
A surreal moment gone too soon

It may not be the best I’ve seen
Tinged with smoke and grenadine
But it goes down smooth, this evening sky
So raise your glass a mile high

‘Cuz it tastes like a Malibu sunset
As close to the beach as I can get
Palms and powerlines mar my view
As I lie here and drink a few

My back to the earth, on solid ground
They say you can’t fall while lying down
Well, if that is what you really think
Perhaps I’ll have just one more drink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/11/2024 2:54:00 PM
beach scene captured vividly, I wish I can be there lying lazy on the sand and drinking and toasting to everyone's health. rhymes well done!
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Ina Goodling
Date: 5/9/2024 4:09:00 PM
Gracias! :D
Date: 2/11/2024 12:55:00 PM
This poem warmed my heart. Now... if only it could do something with my weather. It's freaking cold up here in Canada. Have a great day my friend.
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Ina Goodling
Date: 5/9/2024 4:09:00 PM
Haha thanks! ^_^

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