Making You Happy My Precious Love
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Author's Notes: Liam McDaid and I co-authored this unrhymed tercet poem entitled: "Making You Happy My Precious Love." This poem touches on the theme of two young lovers finding each other and their quest to be together and to seek happiness as their mutual relationship continues to blossom and mature. The lovers eventually "meld" as ONE in their love relationship, essentially seizing their very destiny and going on to fulfill it. (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid - January 11, 2015) (Unrhymed Tercet) Categories: allegory, emotions, feelings, imagery, joy, love, and together.
Upon the winds whispering so gently a love story unfolds
Under soft beautiful clouds with rainfalls splashing love
With two lovers holding, caressing, and kissing one another
The radiant azure sky fresh with recent rain and a rainbow
Gives way toward evening to a cold moon face wishing to
Take the two lovers to a faraway special place full of sunshine
This magical place is where the sun shines forever beautiful
And the feelings, desires, passions, and emotions of love are
Always together true as ONE of a much bigger love portrait
This young man and woman walk hand-in-hand very much in
Love while listening to the far distant echoes thundering from
Surrounding cliffs while near the ocean dream seagulls cry aloud
As the man opens the gates of this paradise with his special lady
They both experience at once blinding tears of warm joy, and he
Just wants to fulfill immediately her every wish to be happy in love
The young man tells his sweetheart with a most earnest passion:
“Dearest One, I want so much to make you happy my precious love!”
Our love My Sweet unites our bodies and souls so complete and whole
These two lovers have found their paradise fulfilling their dream of being
Together always walking under a wonderful star-filled sky dazzling pure
Sharing their love and seizing their very destiny now—Two now as ONE
Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright ©
All Rights Reserved (January 11, 2015) (Unrhymed Tercet)
Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2015
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