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Making Adjustments

Goals never sleep; dreams never die. Though youth may set their goals sky-high, then find some vows are hard to keep, dreams never die; goals never sleep. Needs pass desires along the way, with work to do and bills to pay. Much perseverance life requires. Along the way, needs pass desires. The wise will make a compromise; those lofty dreams, they will revise— not bury, so their hearts won’t break. A compromise, the wise will make. July 21, 2020 entered in the Strand Completely New (12) Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/26/2020 11:20:00 AM
Hope the grandchildren listen to this sage advice of yours, Janice!... We often have to compromise our 'follow-your-dream' mantra for years, even decades --- but the thing is to keep a finger, even the pinkie, in that 'dream pie.' 'Cos someday... ha, ha, ha -- You can retire and write poetry!! Great write, Janice. :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/5/2020 9:10:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
Date: 7/22/2020 9:05:00 AM
Wisdom in your verse Janice, dreams never die, goals never sleep, love it. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/22/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 7/22/2020 6:55:00 AM
Quite meaningful, Janice...so much gleams in this swap quatrain..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/22/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

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