Makes Love To Me

by looking me in my eyes with an amazed stare ,stroking my hair lightly as he rubs his hand 
across my cheek, moving closely slowly until are lips are almost touching, he looks down at 
my chest to see that its heavily moving. that one finger is now going across my spine as he 
whispers lightly I 'm glad your mine. Starting with a small peck on my forehead now he is at 
my feet, not missing an inch of my body now i'm feeling week. now i'm rolled over and the 
song is on repeat. with my clothes never leaving my skin this love making wins. this is what i 
call making love to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 12, 2010 at 1:27 PM
sensual poem, again welcome to petry soup!!
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March 10, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight in narrative form.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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March 10, 2010 at 12:35 PM
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March 10, 2010 at 10:59 AM
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