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Make Me Wanna Die

Crushed stones trampled upon desire raped the rose vase broken Diatribe and gothic screams songs twirl inside my head my cold cold face my fortress a magic cruel horror place in the dark... I run, run , run make me wanna die Cause I am so fed up all my tears have run away hidden in my coffin of spears spurts of bloody skin naked, never good enough just a scrawny dead torso make me wanna die https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txBfhpm1jI0

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/22/2024 6:31:00 AM

Aurore, I could not say anything about this work better than Paul has already commented. That you so passionately express such feelings in such a poetic way is fabulous! :)

Valsa George

Date: 6/23/2022 12:32:00 AM

Too poignant.... the sobbing of a broken soul...... I am sure this is fictional. Or if you are really passing through such a darlk phase of life, please believe, the sky will clear and dark clouds will go away. Wait for the morn. The pedulum will swing in your favor. Believe it. Thanks Aurora for your kind visit!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2022 12:20:00 PM

This is an excellent poem which reflects the vein running throughout the song by Pretty Reckless~Make me Wanna Die. Taylor Momsen has a superb voice! the whole band rocks! ~ Warm regards, Aurore // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/7/2022 7:03:00 PM

Dark and sultry poem, extremely evocative… and that video, yum! Never heard of them! Reminds me of Garbage, with a touch of Hole. Thank you! xomo

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/7/2022 6:30:00 PM

Wow! Aurora, You penned such a well-written write on a different subject. It's so sad when someone makes another human being feel like this-Alexis

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/5/2021 3:51:00 AM

How awful it is when people make us feel like we are not good enough, its time to take the reigns, and drive your own horse to the peaceful lake of love and joy my dear, do or die they say, much love and prayers are needed here.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2021 12:53:00 AM

How sad Aurore. But then look who's talking. I'm not suicidal, but I do have a death wish. Great emotions.