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Make Hay

Make hay! Meant the macaw's epiphany Coming in propinquity of the demesne Pondering the erstwhile efflorescence of dalliance, she chirped The bucolic redolent was everywhere, smelling petrichor in the air This land is her home, she whistled with serenpidity Harbinger of ephemeral life, she chattered: While the sun shines, Make hay!

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Date: 4/27/2016 10:31:00 PM
Ali, Congratulations on your "Day in town win. XOX *LINDA*
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:53:00 AM
Wow Ali, this is most impressive. Congratulations on your wonderful win! I am amazed that you blended all these words with such brevity. Awesome! #7 :)
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
Great rictameter... Congratulations...
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Date: 4/14/2016 12:45:00 AM
a great use of those words in your rictameter. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:50:00 PM
Ali N, Congrats on your "Day In A Town win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2016 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations Ali on the placement of the contest
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Date: 3/31/2016 6:46:00 PM
Ali,, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Ali Nusreth
Date: 4/1/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Linda for the encouragement.

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