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"Major Love" My dear Major Love, are You following me yet? all the sunrising storms read? soliloquys too many to mention my very brave Major Love You’ll find me yet tomorrow is never too late in this dreamscape it won’t be the Love that everyone suspects it commenced inside and yet You made it out two weeks late are You following me yet? Footprints left oh so very left, yet You are right, so very very right it's all very black and white messy and neat romance of a lifetime my brave Major Love yet, somehow I know You this You know alone, You feel incomplete dear Major Love You’ll find me yet lost in the crowd of any leftfield audience their better minds in hand do not fit this catcher’s mit that is a fact, You can be certain of that, my brave Major Love but You, my dear Major Love 1st base, 2nd, and 3rd always watched, as if an eyeball in the sky hovers over You holds You fast and intent watching for all the home runs you have spent I am not in the bleechers I am fixed on You focused eyed the winning ball pitching Life It is only for You in dreams I will always meet You are You ready? it is all for You stoic Major Love one two three owl one two three owl eyes wide open You now strike matched and outrun winning the race, yet sometimes we lose, Major Love but We losers get back up again there is no giving up there is never no giving up all the way home my brave Major Love the game already won the field wide open before You You'll fall again, this much is true, but We get back up again there is never no giving up my much loved Major Love the whole field before You my gloriously embarrassed heart read Major Love face flushed, You are always Loved my best Major Love We dance We love We fall We get back up again always for Love it is always for Love courage, my much loved only Major Love Candide Diderot. ‘24 lux gvlm lux "There's no eye in the sky Just our love No unobstructed view No perfect truths Just our love, just our love And there's no verse No monument of words For our love For they can't hold All I know About my love, about my love..."

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Candide Diderot

Date: 6/14/2024 12:57:00 PM

For gvlm. Xx

Edward Wraith

Date: 6/14/2024 9:20:00 AM

Congrats Candid on POTD!!! This is truly a beautiful piece. I’ve had three reads so far, captivating, transformative and inspiring. It’s a hunt for a unicorn…….

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/14/2024 12:57:00 PM

Thank you. :)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/6/2024 12:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/6/2024 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Daisy.

Sam Scott

Date: 6/5/2024 11:53:00 PM

A captivating poem - especially for those who know and have known love.. I particularly like "this You know alone, You feel incomplete" almost as if we have been searching for the missing part of ourselves and never realised until it is found. Sam :)

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/6/2024 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Sam.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/5/2024 11:49:00 PM

A wonderful read Candide, congratulations on your free verse ‘Major Love’ having been honoured with poem of the day… Beryl

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/6/2024 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Beryl.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/5/2024 2:03:00 PM

Congratulation on your well written and creative poem being chosen as POTD, Candide! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet in Texas, Bill

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Bill.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/5/2024 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Major Love" write. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Paula.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2024 7:39:00 AM

Very creative verse Candide, without love we'd certainly be lost. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 3:26:00 PM

This is a fact and this is true Tom Cunningham. Thank you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/5/2024 5:29:00 AM

Dear Candide, Okay, I think this is an amazing poem! Just the clever wordplay sweeps me into your dreamscape. I really think your brave vulnerability shines through every line. A huge congratulations on this well-deserved POTD win. This is a FAV for me! Enjoy your accolades, for you deserve it, my friend. CONGRATS! - Daniel

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 6:03:00 AM

Thank you. Maybe not brave, maybe reckless. But then, chaos has a way of making things fall just so...the just so, falls ...well, it always falls...sometimes the way it was orchestrated by some other source, of greater mystery, possibly not meant to be solved. Ghosts...where would you be without them?

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/5/2024 3:07:00 AM

Candide, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 3:15:00 AM

Thank you Tania.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/5/2024 1:51:00 AM

Well looks like your major love has scored a major hit on the soup today Candide, quite a lyrical poem, written with innovative language and technique, congratulations on a deserving POTD, cheers David

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 3:50:00 PM

Yes I had read it, I do have a soft spot in the ol' heart for all Liliths. She can be found boxed within this poem. You don't have to look too hard. Deconstructed Liliths intrigue me. There are many Liliths around and I am never alone. **************************** https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/canon_service_1649100

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/5/2024 4:13:00 AM

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/lilith_1646779

Candide Diderot
Date: 6/5/2024 2:52:00 AM

Oh Kavanagh. What a surprise. Perhaps the revelry and celebration not for long. Thank you. Warmest regards outside the Gates of Hell. Cerebus (or possibly Lilith), the rank disassociation continues. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/hmmm_1650553