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Maiden

the sun’s new today but the breeze ageless this conversation with moon and stars this piece of rock beneath my feet steadfast while the drink you make too strong you know when I walk through the door you work for tips while clouds drift like dreams there’s a chirping in empty air tangled patch of trees at the edge of town lies beneath stars that hide the juke box plays but no one dances clouds that pass mean nothing it has already rained

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Date: 7/22/2021 4:01:00 PM
Your style is so gorgeous, Mike. Slice of life perfection.
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Date: 7/22/2021 8:21:00 AM
A rather sad situation, a bar/shop with no real activities. But I'm sure a people arrive there will be movement.
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Date: 7/22/2021 7:19:00 AM
Deep meaning, Mike, great write:)
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