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Maid For The Ungrateful

She's thirty-three, single, her Mom babysits her five year old son. She reassures herself it's just two more hours, then it's the blessed weekend. Which means delicious sleep. She has no nest egg, she's just getting by. There is one kind aging matron who makes her lunch when she cleans her large stately home. Yet, other well-to-do homeowners cast their false superiority heavy in the air as she imagines wiping off their smug faces with Pledge. She hums to a catchy pop tune while scrubbing toilets and spraying down whirlpool bathtubs as her muscles ache, wishing she could soak in one. Maid for the ungrateful, she smiles remembering her First Holy Communion, her snow-white lacy veil, with her rosary of pearlescent ivory beads. Then, a memory of teenage politics of high school with random daydreams like impromptu snapshots. Her lips and throat dry from those wretched aerosol sprays, always forgetting her face mask. A few sips of tepid Gatorade, as she softly prays her son will excel in school. Her learning disabilities held her back despite her gift of intelligence. This day's cleaning was at the home of a lawyer's snooty wife, who was lunching with friends after klutzy attempts at tennis at the country club. Maid for the ungrateful, can hardly wait to get home to soak her worn feet with warm water and Epsom salt in a porcelain basin. ~

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Date: 2/14/2024 5:22:00 PM
Nice poetry, Regina. I can remember back 59m years ago, first year in the Air Force, $76 every two weeks and a wife at home with a baby on the way. We cleaned home to make ends meet for a couple of years. Hard work, but the hardest part was being looked down on when we were doing our best. We knew that God was pleased that we tried to treat everyone like we wanted to be treated. Bless you or the woman in your poem, for doing what needed to be done. I respect her for that. Hugs, Bill
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Regina Elliott
Date: 2/16/2024 2:33:00 PM
My deep thanks, Bill. My unnamed maid in my poem story is a composite of several other maids I worked with, and a little bit of me (the learning disabilities part.) We're kindred spirits in the looked down upon dept. But, despite that negative part, our Lord loves His salt of the earth. Blessings to you.
Date: 2/14/2024 4:16:00 PM
Outstanding....what ungracious, snooty people. If the maid in this poem is you, I admire your courage in doing what you needed to do...sounds like a touch job and an unappreciated profession. Nicely done, Regina. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Regina Elliott
Date: 2/16/2024 2:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. My unnamed maid in my poem story is a composite of several other maids I worked with and a little of myself (the learning disabilities part.) It was not easy work, but we were God's salt of the earth earning bread for our tables. Many blessings to you and Bill. ~
Date: 2/14/2024 3:18:00 PM
Great write! We must remember that those who serve around us are people.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 2/16/2024 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. Our laborers, servers, and domestic workers are the salt of the earth loved by the Lord. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. God's blessings to you. ~
Date: 2/14/2024 11:01:00 AM
Hi Regina..,interestingly enough, this is a great read as I saw myself in it I ……. worked for very wealthy people tcaring for their children, but they were far from ungrateful!they wanted a top notch nnanny..This was in SF in a penthouse, and they had a maid too!But your Maid had a rough go, you made that artisically clear. The last five lines were splendid. At times kids are told they are limited,and it is true! Making this a Fav!Should be a POTD! Pangie xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/14/2024 12:23:00 PM
I got the comment just fine! thank you. Pxx
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Regina Elliott
Date: 2/14/2024 11:16:00 AM
Hi dear Pangie, thank you so very much for the FAV, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you were treated well as a nanny. I was a maid in Raleigh, NC for a little while. So this poem has a little bit of me in it. Thank you for your encouraging support. Love & Blessings xoxx

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