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Magnolias

The heady scent of summer nights will glorify a lady much adored; musky premonitions of an unrequited love, a passion much too deep to be ignored. All-consuming frenzy, reason does not rule his fevered mind. She has said: 'No more!' yet he won't accept her condemnation, won't endure a heartache that would cut him to the core. Magnolias fill the air with the fragrance of desire; two men at odds, emotions frayed, yet resolute. Two shots resound through early morning light, one man lies dead, the other's hopes lie mute.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/20/2012 10:02:00 AM
This must have happened back in the olden days when dueling might get the prize. Cana't imagine anything so roma ntic hapening today. Love the scent in this!
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Date: 5/2/2009 5:23:00 PM
Woah, The ills of obsessive passion. Well written, Keith. The end was actually a surprise. Excellent writing. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/2/2009 9:21:00 AM
This certainly took a twist I wasn't expecting. I think of the violence of life now and when you think back that a dishonor could lead to a duel let alone a love. As a stupid kid I reember thinking it sounded romantic but how happy would the couple be. Reason rules. Nice job kiddo.
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Date: 5/2/2009 8:15:00 AM
being from that part of the country where magnolia is the state tree. i picture a duel back in fairy tale days. but today ? what woman is worth it? jhl
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