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We concentrate more on what is real.  An inner drive and magnetic zone deal.  Awareness intentness is on one's mind.  Heart's ethos renders me fondle the steel. Ethics reflects views of what's right and kind.  A veiled celestial link, a choice to find. Harmonize with a live-conscious heartbeat.  Brain death is a mind strand, as he runs blind. Sway mindsets if the supply is complete.  Praise the law of desire; all have been neat. Love abounds deep inside and high above. into the zone, where timelessness repeats. Scarce powers can't ban a wicked one's love.  "Positive force" fits the globe like a glove.  God's gift of calm allows the soul to flow.  What we see is a snake shedding its dove. I flew your magnetic pull like a foe. Your gentle pull expands me beyond glow. You drew me out; now you're luring me back.  You're proving to me that I'm a steel woe. Magnet is the compass path, none you lack.  Needle aimed in the path of your heart wrack. Whether North, East, West, or South of the globe,  It will allow you to find your cleared track.
Written: October 13, 2022 Our Innate Magnetism Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/28/2022 8:21:00 AM
I’ll go with the magnetic pull of conscience! Warmest congratulations on your win, Sotto. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/28/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading placing and commenting on my poem. It's highly appreciated, keep sponsoring such a great contest that gives PS a nicer place. Regards
Date: 10/13/2022 4:55:00 PM
You have shared a wonderful version of Magnetism Lasaad...
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