Magnetic North

MAGNETIC NORTH

A house misses you.
You don’t live there now.
It’s delighted to see you.
It pulls you to it’s curb.

A house misses you.
You happen by.
That dark window,
knows your outside.

That house misses you!
There are the violets.
Once grown in a window.
They are now, long gone.

You glance at the path.
Your sister is playing.
Grandmother waters,
her petunias in pink.

You can’t go inside now.
You can see through walls.
There’s the library table,
and the rollaway bed.

You hear the snap echo!
It’s the summer green beans. 
We’re on the back porch,
prepping for supper time .

Big begonias bloom.
Apricot pies cool, 
on a kitchen towel.
The house misses you!

You’ve been recognized!
Door, window, and roof,
calling loudly your name.
You stop with a screech.

Oak trees, and neighbors.
They're all strangers now!
But the house wants all, 
your secrets, and stories.

A house holds memories!
It’s eyes are the windows.
It sees you escaping,
you know that it sees. 

The house misses you.
You will not drive by!
It begs for a passing. 
You cannot go back.

A new little house,
with windows for eyes.
New stories and people,
that make up your ties.

A house misses you.
Go fast when it calls!
It will pull at your foot,
and twist at your heart. 

-Edlynn Nau

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/12/2020 10:26:00 AM
Hi Edlynn! A pleasure to see you back at Soup and to read this new poem of yours. You give life to this house and the memories that go with it. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 2/12/2020 12:32:00 PM
Hey Paul! Trying free verse which many people in this day and age like better. Go Figure (ha ha ha)! They never set free verse to music... oh then they want it to rhyme. I think everything depends on what you grow up with. I found most teachers DO NOT TEACH poetry and when they do.. they teach it miserably. The maths, stress, beats, syllable count is such a balancing act. Free verse the work is with the words. One day, I’d like to try every genre listed in PS just for a stretch and growth.
Date: 2/10/2020 11:31:00 PM
Edlynn your talent never renders surrender. Hope you are well my dear. Thought I stop by and enjoy you today...
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Michael Tor
Date: 4/27/2020 2:30:00 AM
No music. Nice vacation, I am working around the house living in NY we must comply with the governors orders. I might write an informative piece, to warn my beloved poets and friends like. you. Keep in touch, miss our chats.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 2/11/2020 12:46:00 AM
Hello Michael. I am so delighted when you stop in. Thank you for giving me a read. Free Verse is new to me so, I’m still cutting my teeth for this genre. Are you writing poetry again or is your time on your music and lyrics? So WONDERFUL to hear from you.
Date: 2/3/2020 12:53:00 AM
Pure creative geniosity, Edlynn! A FAVE for me! Thanks, Gershon
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 2/3/2020 1:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading it and taking the time to comment. I appreciate your time and delighted that it’s a favorite for you. I don’t usually write free verse but, as of late, find people think I can express shared experiences in that genre. So I may give it a try more often.
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