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Magical Morning

A mossy pebbled path I took,
                                I came upon a babbling brook;
                                Meandering around the bend,
                            I could not see where it might end;
                             An idle copse of shrubs and trees,
                          Whistling in the calm, morning breeze;
                         Boughs shrouded with lichens hang low,
                               Dangling over the waters flow;
                             Dainty ruffles taunting the shore,
                           Smooth stones adorn the basin floor;
                             Sunlight streams, a magical light,
                         Appearing through the trees, a sprite!











Date: March 30, 2022
For: Form  -L – New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : Constance La France
Theme: Nature
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Placed 3rd in contest

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Constance La France Date: 4/8/2022 1:36:00 PM Paulette, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/9/2022 6:05:00 AM Thank you for the placement in your contest. I am enjoying your contests, addressing various forms of poetry;forms that I may have never explored. Blessings, Paulette

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/7/2022 3:15:00 PM Congrats on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading the lines because it reminds me of scenes in my life. Sara Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/7/2022 5:18:00 PM So glad you enjoyed it and that it brought up the warm memories you hold. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/5/2022 9:42:00 AM Congrats! Lovely! Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/5/2022 5:47:00 PM Thank you Kim! :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/4/2022 6:51:00 AM Vivid illustration. Congratulations! Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/4/2022 5:03:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Valsa George Date: 3/31/2022 10:20:00 PM Indeed a magical morning ! Charting the flow of a lovely brook is always a sweet experience. Lovely entry for the contest, dear Paulette ! Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/1/2022 7:39:00 AM Dear Valsa, Thank you for your lovely comments. :)Paulette

Bill Baker Date: 3/31/2022 5:04:00 PM Excellent entry for the contest, Paulette. Your imagery and descriptions are enchanting. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/1/2022 7:40:00 AM Thank you Bill~it was a fun write. :)Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/31/2022 1:52:00 PM Such beautiful imagery Paulette, just could picture one walking your walk with these words in our head loving its every moment. Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/31/2022 4:39:00 PM Thank you Gordon~a lovely walk,even if it is in my head. Blessings, Paulette

Frederic Parker Date: 3/30/2022 3:53:00 PM A lovely stroll dear poet, peaceful and serene, very creative Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 4:56:00 PM Glad you enjoyed the stroll along with me. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins Date: 3/30/2022 8:10:00 AM I love it, Paulette. It conjures up such magical memories of a stroll. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 12:13:00 PM Thank you Milton~a fun write for Spring. :)Paulette

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/30/2022 7:41:00 AM Paulette, your imagery is impeccable! Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 12:13:00 PM Wow~thank you for complimentary comments. :)Paulette

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/30/2022 7:09:00 AM Love the imagery Paulette, you take the reader on an enchanting stroll. Best of luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 12:14:00 PM Glad you enjoyed the stroll! :)Paulette

Honestly J.T. Date: 3/30/2022 6:12:00 AM Cool poem; enjoyed reading it -JT Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 6:37:00 AM Thank you J.T~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/30/2022 6:01:00 AM How I wish yo find such a lovely place where my soul may find some peace. A lovely lay. Best for a win. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/30/2022 6:38:00 AM Wishing you Peace dear Victor~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette