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Magical Moon

Magical moon Enchanted night Bring to me ~ a love So right ~ Please send Him down upon your Beams ~the loving man in All my dreams ~ Guide him With your perfect light ~ into My heart this very night ~ Please let us sing ~ oh, Let us dance~ in a circle Of pure romance ~ so I will close this Sacred rite ~ with A kiss for luck~ And good night Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/28/2010 5:31:00 PM

Not ionly is the moon magical.. so is your talent. The creativity and imagery you have instilled is breathtaking. I believe I am fortunate among poets to experience this marvelous masterpiece. Mac

Simone Segal

Date: 12/6/2009 6:08:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful,It is a pleasure reading your poetry! I prayed to meet my love,you can see in my poem I Blinked And He Was There, love Simone

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 10:14:00 PM

Lolita, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/30/2009 4:21:00 PM

congrats! Lolita! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2009 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Lena. Love,Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2009 11:07:00 AM

Lena, very nice shape and theme, congratulations in your win in Deborah's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2009 9:28:00 AM

Congrats, Lolita, on your winning poem in Deb's contest.. such a unique design here and words so beautiful... happy to share stage with u as honorable mention too.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand

Date: 11/29/2009 11:46:00 PM

Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Lena.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 11/29/2009 5:54:00 PM

Lolita, I think this was one of the best submissions! Congratulations on your success in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/26/2009 4:17:00 PM

I wrote a new poem.It's called Life is to Short.check it out and tell me what you think.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/23/2009 8:49:00 PM

Lolita! I love this! Awesome image and poetry! Bravo!

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/22/2009 2:35:00 PM

very nicely written.thanx for the comments on my poems.

Date: 11/21/2009 4:47:00 PM

This is so artistic. The way it is arranged it gives a perseption that the moom has a face--it least it does for me. Hope those dreams come true. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing!! Karen

Constance La France

Date: 11/20/2009 8:42:00 PM

its really lovely...these concrete poems are so difficult to do.. and you did an amazing job... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. I Pray

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 12:39:00 PM

Dear Lena. This is superb. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2009 10:27:00 AM

Nicely done concrete. Keep the creative pen flowing. This are really hard to do. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/20/2009 3:40:00 AM

Lena, Your shape poem is very beautiful. The romance associated with this dreamy poem reflects beautifully in your words and shines brightly through the 'moonly" shape!!! VERY CREATIVE. Sincerely, Dane Ann

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/19/2009 6:52:00 PM

gorgeous! Lena! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2009 10:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing and moon with us Lena. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 11/18/2009 10:00:00 PM

Lena I love your poem....enjoyed...Marty

P Sheart

Date: 11/18/2009 4:57:00 PM

Lolita, Ah I got a kick out of this one! So witty and creative. Love the sentiments in the moon....May the perfect man come to you in the right time, the right place, smile. Thanks for sharing. Take care hun. Love Light Patty