Lena Townsend Poet Concrete

Magical Moon

                                         Magical moon
                                                          Enchanted night
                                                              Bring to me ~ a love
                                                               So right ~ Please send
                                                                    Him down upon your 
                                                                Beams ~the loving man in 
                                                              All my dreams ~ Guide him
                                                            With your perfect light ~ into
                                                                   My heart this very night ~
                                                                       Please let us sing ~ oh,
                                                                  Let us dance~ in a circle
                                                                    Of pure romance ~ so
                                                                          I will close this 
                                                                  Sacred rite ~ with
                                                              A kiss for luck~
                                                     And good night    
                                                                   




                                      Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Mac Mcgovern January 28, 2010 at 5:31 PM Not ionly is the moon magical.. so is your talent. The creativity and imagery you have instilled is breathtaking. I believe I am fortunate among poets to experience this marvelous masterpiece. Mac

Simone Segal December 6, 2009 at 6:08 AM Absolutely beautiful,It is a pleasure reading your poetry! I prayed to meet my love,you can see in my poem I Blinked And He Was There, love Simone

Raul Moreno November 30, 2009 at 10:14 PM Lolita, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

James Marshall Goff November 30, 2009 at 4:21 PM congrats! Lolita! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2009 at 1:21 PM Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Lena. Love,Carol

James Fraser November 30, 2009 at 11:07 AM Lena, very nice shape and theme, congratulations in your win in Deborah's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 30, 2009 at 9:28 AM Congrats, Lolita, on your winning poem in Deb's contest.. such a unique design here and words so beautiful... happy to share stage with u as honorable mention too.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand November 29, 2009 at 11:46 PM Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Lena.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden November 29, 2009 at 5:54 PM Lolita, I think this was one of the best submissions! Congratulations on your success in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

Colleen Bono November 26, 2009 at 4:17 PM I wrote a new poem.It's called Life is to Short.check it out and tell me what you think.

Izzy Gumbo November 23, 2009 at 8:49 PM Lolita! I love this! Awesome image and poetry! Bravo!

Colleen Bono November 22, 2009 at 2:35 PM very nicely written.thanx for the comments on my poems.

November 21, 2009 at 4:47 PM This is so artistic. The way it is arranged it gives a perseption that the moom has a face--it least it does for me. Hope those dreams come true. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing!! Karen

Constance La France November 20, 2009 at 8:42 PM its really lovely...these concrete poems are so difficult to do.. and you did an amazing job... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. I Pray

Elaine George November 20, 2009 at 12:39 PM Dear Lena. This is superb. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2009 at 10:27 AM Nicely done concrete. Keep the creative pen flowing. This are really hard to do. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 20, 2009 at 3:40 AM Lena, Your shape poem is very beautiful. The romance associated with this dreamy poem reflects beautifully in your words and shines brightly through the 'moonly" shape!!! VERY CREATIVE. Sincerely, Dane Ann

James Marshall Goff November 19, 2009 at 6:52 PM gorgeous! Lena! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown November 19, 2009 at 10:46 AM Thank you for sharing your splendid writing and moon with us Lena. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Marty Owens November 18, 2009 at 10:00 PM Lena I love your poem....enjoyed...Marty

P Sheart November 18, 2009 at 4:57 PM Lolita, Ah I got a kick out of this one! So witty and creative. Love the sentiments in the moon....May the perfect man come to you in the right time, the right place, smile. Thanks for sharing. Take care hun. Love Light Patty