Magical Moments:

Magical moments are what make life great,
The simple things in life are often missed,
Don't worry about the future and fate,
Come out in the clearing and leave the mist.

You're beginning to show me signs of this,
Welcome me into your arms one more time,
May we both enter a state of true bliss,
Shall we find that mountain for us to climb.

And is it not love which life is about,
For all do deserve it in their own right,
In the garden of Eden plants do sprout,
Under cover of darkness in the night.

So come with me now before all is lost,
For we can conquer no matter the cost.
                      /|\
(Ten syllables per line)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ricci Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 4:51 AM
Morning White Wolf. Where would we be without having magic or passion in our life. Nowhere. We so need to have light to continue on. I loved the concept of this. Wonderful work and expression. May today have magic for one and all. Well done entirely.
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 4:59 AM
Thank you very much, Lisa. You are too kind /|\
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 2:21 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Rick. It's going in my faves for sure. Lovely and romantic, my type of poetry fare to dine on. Love always from RW.
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 2:29 AM
Wow! What a great comment RW! Thanks for that /|\
La France Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Rick, beautifully penned poem, united in love we can conquer all, well done ~
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:15 PM
United in love we can conquer all, That is ten syllables too! Haha! Thanks, BW... /|\
P  Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Feel good poetry, perfect for a Saturday!
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, Paloma /|\
Gupta Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Yes, we can conquer ... very good sonnet indeed ... liked it ...
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Thanks, Probir /|\
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