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magical maze

but my heart still weeps to be a Swarovski spark~ within the amorous soul of your stellar skies, where singing sunsets bask in petrichor sighs, mirroring magical wings amidst blushing vines, while I burn for you in silence, like sleepless stars~ immersed in a moonlit maze of painted love….

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2024 12:58:00 PM

oh I love your short poems, Ink. I kind of forgot if this was for a contest, but it seems like it could be for one of our recent contests!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/30/2024 10:26:00 AM

You paint your Verse with your flowing ink and colour with what is rich in you of emotions, state of mind and soul.. what we receive as readers a magical beauty in a stunning painting! So much pleased reading your bleeding ink dear Empress.. God bless you and my best wishes and regards.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thank you dear besma so kind of you to visit and comment im truly grateful and pleased to see you today

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/29/2024 8:21:00 AM

painting emotion on a visible canvas draws the reader to be spellbound

Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 8:27:00 AM

Its always an honor hearing from you dear frederick! Thank you so very much truly always

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2024 6:16:00 AM

This is beautiful, romantic and magical, Empress! Striking phrases and alliteration enhance your writing...a pleasure to read! ~ Regards // paul

Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 8:33:00 AM

This such a thoughtful and kind comment and its always an honor hearing from you really

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2024 5:01:00 AM

Very descriptive lines penned. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 8:40:00 AM

Thats so kind of you to say dear sara thank you so very much

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/28/2024 9:44:00 PM

Oh my, my! A clear fav

Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 8:45:00 AM

Oh my to receive a fave from you is an honor dear seeker, thank you so very much

Paige Hind

Date: 9/28/2024 7:20:00 PM

Truly lovely, dear Ink. You must keep writing...I have to admit, I was worried about you! Hugs, just me! :)

Billie Jama

Date: 9/28/2024 1:58:00 PM

I love how this piece creates such vivid, emotional imagery. Lines like "singing sunsets bask in petrichor sighs" and "I burn for you in silence, like sleepless stars" really resonate with me. The dreamy, romantic atmosphere total gripping. Fantastic Ink sis

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2024 12:29:00 PM

Hello Ink Empress, I gaze up to the dark sky often to see the m oon. I love the full moon with the stars shining bright. Hugs. /Darlene/.

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 9/28/2024 12:00:00 PM

Mmmmm that flooooowwww!!! heart still weeps to be a Swarovski spark within the amorous soul of your stellar skies,… mmmm.. look that the gloriousness of that line … where singing sunsets bask in petrichor sighs, damn it’s like u know how to take my breathe away.. I burn for you in silence… me too papi!!!! Soo much spicy food already burning .. immersed in a moonlit maze of painted love….the dreaminess of this piece is sooo effortless

Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 12:40:00 PM

Ooh yeah I'll pass with flying colors no doubt

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/28/2024 12:34:00 PM

Hahaha … u will have to go through a series of exams n tournaments XD… ur test will be chosen within the next 3-2 working days… thank u for applying at www.academyofpapilicous.com … hahahahhaha XD

Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 12:22:00 PM

Can I be a papi? Jus askin