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Magical Love

I stand upon the pier
Watching the roaring waves
Crash on the hard dark rocks below.
 
The sky is overcast
Electricity is in the air
And rain is not far away.
 
Still I feel there's magic
Around me as the day
Dies a slow lingering death.
 
I feel anticipation
For soon you'll be with me,
It's such a wonderful feeling
I'm sure it’s infinite.
 
Let nature wreck its havoc,
Let night descend in darkness
And blot out all the stars.
I see only one light, my dear,
That which shines in your eyes.
 
You come into my caress sweet,
We share our gentle kisses
Sweet nectar from flowers dear.
 
We move silently together
Our hands touching in bliss
To shelter in our little home
Away from everything.
 
It is a magical evening
Together we make love
And know 'twill be forever
Just you and me.... just us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 1:24 PM
Enjoyed, quite romantic! Congrats being in top 100!
Baker Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 1:43 PM
Romantic and beautiful love poem, Victor. I could sense the gentleness and blissfulness of your love for one another. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Skelly Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 3:46 AM
Spell-binding love...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Ahhh!! Very romantic work you have penned in this one. We all want that magic in our lives even in old age. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
M  Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 11:45 PM
Mr Romance….that’s what you should be called Victor! You write masterfully about love and romance. Your sweet wife must have been very happy with you Victor. Love this poem. Debx
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 1:17 PM
You still have the will to inspire. Brilliant and heartwarming. Cheers David in NZ
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 6:21 AM
'Magical Love' breeds magical poetry Victor, love this.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 6:23 PM
That’s beautiful Victor, love stays forever in one’s heart, magic moments are often recalled in thought, into existence brought… Belle
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Very romantic and nature’s imagery very moving. Many blessings and hugs your way
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 7:41 AM
I feel the tingling magic of this lovely poem Victor! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 6:43 AM
I see only one light, my dear, That which shines in your eyes...beautiful! Hugs ~ Kim
Tor Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Victor a home run here my friend. Beautiful and a magical romance... Loved it.
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:33 PM
As magical a night as this poem is!!
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:02 PM
What a wonderful evening adorned with magical romance! Deeply passionate and overflowing with profound love! Added to my fave. Best regards, Enjoyed so much Victor!
Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Such a blissfully happy, and magically romantic evening is imagined here, Victor. This is delightful reading, and a fave for me. :)
Raven Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Hi Victor, I absolutely love this write. I enjoyed the words that painted your canvas with such life-like images. Love did sing in the air. You are becoming the master of romance, my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.
Lawrence Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Love the intimacy of your heart and moments to be shared here. You are a true romantic expressing your thoughts so beautifully Victor . Hugs to you , Susan :)
Pandit Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Romance blossoms in every word, Victor--magical evening of anticipation--enjoyed the poem and blissful ending.
Seeker Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:14 AM
Keep on dancing, Victor! Beautiful!
Cunningham Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:07 AM
You paint a very romantic scene Victor. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:06 AM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
George Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:00 AM
What blissful togetherness ! Very romatic and strongly passionate ! Enjoyed much, dear Victor !
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