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Magical Love

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I stand upon the pier Watching the roaring waves Crash on the hard dark rocks below. The sky is overcast Electricity is in the air And rain is not far away. Still I feel there's magic Around me as the day Dies a slow lingering death. I feel anticipation For soon you'll be with me, It's such a wonderful feeling I'm sure it’s infinite. Let nature wreck its havoc, Let night descend in darkness And blot out all the stars. I see only one light, my dear, That which shines in your eyes. You come into my caress sweet, We share our gentle kisses Sweet nectar from flowers dear. We move silently together Our hands touching in bliss To shelter in our little home Away from everything. It is a magical evening Together we make love And know 'twill be forever Just you and me.... just us.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 8/13/2022 1:24:00 PM

Enjoyed, quite romantic! Congrats being in top 100!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/29/2022 1:43:00 PM

Romantic and beautiful love poem, Victor. I could sense the gentleness and blissfulness of your love for one another. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/27/2022 3:46:00 AM

Spell-binding love...Delice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2022 12:47:00 PM

Ahhh!! Very romantic work you have penned in this one. We all want that magic in our lives even in old age. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Deb M

Date: 7/24/2022 11:45:00 PM

Mr Romance….that’s what you should be called Victor! You write masterfully about love and romance. Your sweet wife must have been very happy with you Victor. Love this poem. Debx

David Smith

Date: 7/24/2022 1:17:00 PM

You still have the will to inspire. Brilliant and heartwarming. Cheers David in NZ

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/24/2022 6:21:00 AM

'Magical Love' breeds magical poetry Victor, love this.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/23/2022 6:23:00 PM

That’s beautiful Victor, love stays forever in one’s heart, magic moments are often recalled in thought, into existence brought… Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 7/23/2022 2:53:00 PM

Very romantic and nature’s imagery very moving. Many blessings and hugs your way

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/23/2022 7:41:00 AM

I feel the tingling magic of this lovely poem Victor! Linda

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2022 6:43:00 AM

I see only one light, my dear, That which shines in your eyes...beautiful! Hugs ~ Kim

Michael Tor

Date: 7/23/2022 4:53:00 AM

Victor a home run here my friend. Beautiful and a magical romance... Loved it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2022 8:33:00 PM

As magical a night as this poem is!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 8:02:00 PM

What a wonderful evening adorned with magical romance! Deeply passionate and overflowing with profound love! Added to my fave. Best regards, Enjoyed so much Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/22/2022 5:10:00 PM

Such a blissfully happy, and magically romantic evening is imagined here, Victor. This is delightful reading, and a fave for me. :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/22/2022 1:07:00 PM

Hi Victor, I absolutely love this write. I enjoyed the words that painted your canvas with such life-like images. Love did sing in the air. You are becoming the master of romance, my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/22/2022 6:08:00 AM

Love the intimacy of your heart and moments to be shared here. You are a true romantic expressing your thoughts so beautifully Victor . Hugs to you , Susan :)