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Magical Love

I stand upon the pier
Watching the roaring waves
Crash on the hard dark rocks below.
 
The sky is overcast
Electricity is in the air
And rain is not far away.
 
Still I feel there's magic
Around me as the day
Dies a slow lingering death.
 
I feel anticipation
For soon you'll be with me,
It's such a wonderful feeling
I'm sure it’s infinite.
 
Let nature wreck its havoc,
Let night descend in darkness
And blot out all the stars.
I see only one light, my dear,
That which shines in your eyes.
 
You come into my caress sweet,
We share our gentle kisses
Sweet nectar from flowers dear.
 
We move silently together
Our hands touching in bliss
To shelter in our little home
Away from everything.
 
It is a magical evening
Together we make love
And know 'twill be forever
Just you and me.... just us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 8/13/2022 1:24:00 PM
Enjoyed, quite romantic! Congrats being in top 100!
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Date: 7/29/2022 1:43:00 PM
Romantic and beautiful love poem, Victor. I could sense the gentleness and blissfulness of your love for one another. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/27/2022 3:46:00 AM
Spell-binding love...Delice
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Date: 7/26/2022 12:47:00 PM
Ahhh!! Very romantic work you have penned in this one. We all want that magic in our lives even in old age. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/24/2022 11:45:00 PM
Mr Romance….that’s what you should be called Victor! You write masterfully about love and romance. Your sweet wife must have been very happy with you Victor. Love this poem. Debx
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Date: 7/24/2022 1:17:00 PM
You still have the will to inspire. Brilliant and heartwarming. Cheers David in NZ
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Date: 7/24/2022 6:21:00 AM
'Magical Love' breeds magical poetry Victor, love this.
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Date: 7/23/2022 6:23:00 PM
That’s beautiful Victor, love stays forever in one’s heart, magic moments are often recalled in thought, into existence brought… Belle
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Date: 7/23/2022 2:53:00 PM
Very romantic and nature’s imagery very moving. Many blessings and hugs your way
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Date: 7/23/2022 7:41:00 AM
I feel the tingling magic of this lovely poem Victor! Linda
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Date: 7/23/2022 6:43:00 AM
I see only one light, my dear, That which shines in your eyes...beautiful! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/23/2022 4:53:00 AM
Victor a home run here my friend. Beautiful and a magical romance... Loved it.
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Date: 7/22/2022 8:33:00 PM
As magical a night as this poem is!!
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Date: 7/22/2022 8:02:00 PM
What a wonderful evening adorned with magical romance! Deeply passionate and overflowing with profound love! Added to my fave. Best regards, Enjoyed so much Victor!
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Date: 7/22/2022 5:10:00 PM
Such a blissfully happy, and magically romantic evening is imagined here, Victor. This is delightful reading, and a fave for me. :)
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Date: 7/22/2022 1:07:00 PM
Hi Victor, I absolutely love this write. I enjoyed the words that painted your canvas with such life-like images. Love did sing in the air. You are becoming the master of romance, my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/22/2022 6:08:00 AM
Love the intimacy of your heart and moments to be shared here. You are a true romantic expressing your thoughts so beautifully Victor . Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Date: 7/22/2022 5:55:00 AM
Romance blossoms in every word, Victor--magical evening of anticipation--enjoyed the poem and blissful ending.
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:14:00 AM
Keep on dancing, Victor! Beautiful!
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:07:00 AM
You paint a very romantic scene Victor. Tom
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:06:00 AM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:00:00 AM
What blissful togetherness ! Very romatic and strongly passionate ! Enjoyed much, dear Victor !
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