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Magical Clouds

Magical clouds float above me, brght silver, light edges to see. Slowly drifting dream-like to be, pulling strings to fly, oh, so free! There's a twinkle from the sunlight, miles of open sky in sight. Smiles lift with a magic churning, slow motion, calming, hearts yearning. Touched by the magical cloud's place, tension leaves, released by the face. Tension is now a step behind, stunning soft clouds with peace to find. Float with magic clouds a moment, in value of a minute spent. Be captured by this creation, watch the angst turn to elation! Heidi Sands 5/22/23 * 8 Syllables

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Mike Gentile

Date: 5/27/2023 4:47:00 AM

It is truly amazing how we can get listen the beauty and serenity of nature! Your lovely poem perfectly express that wonderful feeling! Happy Saturday Heidi xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2023 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your kind comment. Happy Saturday :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2023 11:29:00 AM

Heidi, you've done a fantastic job with the concept and the accompanying visuals. Be enchanted by this work of art, and see your despair dissolve into joy; those are some cheery closing lines.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/23/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your visit and kind feedback. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2023 5:47:00 AM

Wonderful theme and matching imagery Heidi. I like the upbeat ending lines: Be captured by this creation, watch the angst turn to elation!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2023 8:29:00 AM

Stay strong my friend. Hope nature will soon return to normal serenity.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/23/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. We are still lacking nature here, since the ordeal in the winter. So it has been difficult. Not one chipmunk came out of their winter holes in the ground from winter. No woodpecker hammering or usual spring birds singing at daylight. It has impacted my writing a lot. I recently had testing done regarding chemicals and dioxins from the train derailment. Waiting on results. I do find inspiration in the sky. I appreciate your support. I am always grateful for your kindness, your feedback and friendship. Take care, my friend ! :)

Michael Tor

Date: 5/22/2023 10:35:00 PM

Such lovely images of clouds to enjoy for a moment beautifully done Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/23/2023 2:13:00 AM

It is so nice to see you Michael. I hope that all is well. Thank you for the kind comment. Tall soon :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2023 4:13:00 PM

- Looking at the clouds... a fun thing, Heidi... watching them shine is magical... so many different shapes... and some predict the weather by the clouds... I've heard that "curly" clouds mean nice weather :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/23/2023 2:11:00 AM

Yes, it is fun. Interesting, what you say. Thank you very much Anne - Lise :)