Magic Rocks

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand

Rolling them over, and over, and over

Leaving this reality behind, far behind

They use to be in my gall bladder

A magical place, where it is dark and stagnant

Land of slumber, land of poisonous gases

Land of cramping bloat, with a sulfur and brimstone moat

Cellular creatures carry away the death

Flushed from the world into a bright watery grave

Incise the evil, release the magic

Tickery, trickery, bamboozle me

When I least expect it, you erupt into the colonic maze

Leaving the body, weak and wasted, unable to defend the fortresses...

Angels or demons converge apon the carcass, poking it with their probes

Preparing it with ointment and spices, to send it into the tormentor

Bleed vessels, bleed, give us all your life

Partake of the concoction to ease your grief and pain...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/21/2009 10:40:00 AM
When the body, when our pain, becomes the metaphor for beauty, the poem grows wings exalted.
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Date: 11/22/2009 2:08:00 PM
Koolio piece Doris, i hope you are feeling better now, and the best of luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:26:00 PM
Those magic rocks are no laughing matter, but this was funny....thanks for the comments on my poems..Danny
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:28:00 AM
outstanding write! I really liked the way this came off the page... :) glad to hear (by way of the comments), that you are 'feeling better'... you got it licked sister. ;)~
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:58:00 AM
well I didn't know whether to laugh(which I did) or be amazed at your poetic biological journey(which Iwas) or empathize with you in your pain(which I do.) Good write. And concerning Just Posting......NOW I get it.!! Brain burn! That IS funny. Thanks-Robert
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Date: 11/13/2009 2:35:00 AM
Excellent write. Your sickness sharpened your wit. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 11/12/2009 6:14:00 PM
Good to hear...I've been praying for you...Marty
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Date: 11/12/2009 6:03:00 PM
Hey Doris...This is very funny and good..Enjoyed reading...good luck in the contest....Are you doing okay? Marty
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Date: 11/12/2009 5:29:00 PM
Now this is funny!!! I love your wonderful and unique twist to this contest!! Hooray for you, Doris!! You rock!!! (no pun intended lol!)
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