Magic of Family Rites

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Sweet pleasures kindle a family of hearts whispering amen for ripples of affection on homely broths, glazed with smiles to wrap dawn and night-time into a vessel of holy gifts, spilling naturally for an abode's roofs on the county: Blessings of life's harvest shared fully far richer than ancestral sprouts birthing family wholeness , so divine
Dave Wood's Imagination Contest 5/20/2014 by nette onclaud
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Deschler Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 12:37 AM
I enjoyed coming back to read your poem, once again, Nette. Congratulations on your win with this heartwarming write!
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Awesome win Nette...PD
Gasun Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:30 PM
An imagination which comes into reality as painted by your very creative words my very dear friend Nette! My big hearty congratulations on your shining win! TYSM for sharing. Thank u so much as well for your precious time and kind visit on my latest poem. Latest update here is 10pm curfew. Hope you've a great day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
George   Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:53 AM
I COMMENTED ON THIS EARLIER, NETTE, TOLD YOU IT WOULD WOULD TOP THE LIST. MANY CONGRAT'S LAINIE
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 9:24 AM
So glad this house is not spic and span ... this makes it feel more like a home! Love the family atmosphere. Lovely ending line! Congrats on a top podium:) // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:18 AM
each corner of the home is filled with so much love and happy scenes that I want just to be in it.. :) kisses plastered on wall: i imagine toddlers kids running playing around.. :D, CONGRATULATIONS! my fave stanza is 1,, :D GBU
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Enchanting Poem Nette a well deserved top spot hugs Jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:11 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, nette
Smith Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Congrats on the win nette...hugs Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:16 PM
Awesome nette ! spectacular write n worthy great win ! congrats !
Parker Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:16 PM
congratulations nette on your win for this heart warming poem
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Nette this is superb, congrats. ...Seren
Rutherford Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 11:57 AM
This embodies home and family Nette. Great poem. Anne
Carrillo Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 11:37 PM
This is a great poem that I was happy to read. Great for the contest... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 10:55 PM
wow, this one is so enchanting and so WARM in the way it recalls childhood. A surefire top winner.
Deschler Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Though it may not be perfect, home is still where the heart is. This is such a heartwarming write, and it brings back those fond memories of home and family. Very nicely done, Nette! Good luck in Dave's contest!
Sirak Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Now this is a home! Are you recalling fond memories?
Carroll Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 10:23 AM
A lovely kinship structure write Nette!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 1:11 AM
Describe beautifully. Home sweet home. Enjoyed. Tfs
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Ahhh Nette how nice to read .. I love it... the perfect setting in a home... what I dream of.. hugs Brooke
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:00 PM
- A homely warmth and lots of love .... pop like popcorn out of this poem, Nette :) - Love it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:50 PM
There is nothing that can warm the heart and soul like a home with a loving family. You are blessed dear Nette. Wonderful ambience you have created with this delicious poem. Thank you for sharing. Also, thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie
Smith Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:27 PM
You describe a beautiful home nette. I love it...hugs Tim
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