Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Quintain (English)

Magic Kisses and Valentine Wishes

The year my dad left for heaven
My mother made a valentine.
She decked and turned it into a pleasant one
making it for her special love divine
She looked at it as a devotee consigned.

 She damped it with kisses sublime.
Then she cut its middle of the heart
and placed her photo in a slit with a rhyming
quintain and she wove a red ribbon smartly
I could thus easily read her wishes partly 

“Love you dear, I’m happy to be your wife
To me you’re like a rock through bad times
Your love has blessed me blissful life
To me you're my cascade in all the good times
Waiting and wishing with you to reunite”

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January 28, 2015
Form : Quintain (English)
Contest: Magic kisses and Valentine wishes

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Funom Makama May 12, 2016 at 11:33 AM Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 3:48 PM DR RAM, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 1, 2015 at 2:43 AM This is truly magic valentine Mahtasaab. God bless. Congrats on win. With regards Rajat

Debbie Guzzi January 31, 2015 at 6:54 PM Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. I hope you get your wish Ram. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson January 31, 2015 at 12:24 AM Lovingly made and creatively written Congratulations on a big win.

Verlena S. Walker January 30, 2015 at 11:06 PM Lovely memories Dr. Ram. Congratulations on the win! Verlena

Carrie Richards January 30, 2015 at 7:31 PM Such a sweet story this is ! Congratulations on your winning poem!!

Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 6:59 PM Oh...such a lovely heartfelt write, Dr Ram. Very lovely, indeed. Congrats on your well deserved win!

Jan Allison January 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM A lovely take on the theme many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet January 30, 2015 at 1:54 PM A marvelous English quintain, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on a fine piece on an unusual approach to the prompt. Well-said.

Emile Pinet January 28, 2015 at 1:14 PM Your emotions and message lift themselves off the page and rest comfortably within the reader's heart. Emile.

Poesy Relish January 28, 2015 at 12:24 PM quite a different take on the topic... a beautiful and touching poem Dr. Ram.