Magic Beans

I hesitate to make it known but it’s true.
The Jack /Beanstalk story isn’t quite right.
Telling the correct version is long overdue.
Hence, herewith I will shed needed light.

Before Jack fled from the giant so scary
He spied a basket of multi-colored beans.
He stuffed his pockets with all he could carry.
Then went down the stalk with bulging jeans.

Safely on earth, he eyed the beans with care.
They were warm to his hand and had a sheen.
His father proclaimed them to be very rare.
And a professor said they had an alien gene.

In the following days Jack gave them a name.
He called them “Magic Beans” on finding out
If rubbed on grass they would burst into flame.
“Dangerous,” dad said, feeding them to trout.

Jack cried hard, his magic beans fish fodder.
When he told his friends of the giant and beans
They said they hadn’t heard a tale any odder.
And that’s the real story out of my dreams.

Jan. 15, 2015, Paul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/16/2015 12:40:00 AM
Paul, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2015 7:06:00 AM
It's typically thoughtful of you to comment, SKAT A. Your words of congratulation are sincerely appreciated.
Date: 2/14/2015 12:02:00 PM
sorry I missed this one before Paul made me smile - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2015 7:09:00 AM
That you, Jan. It's sweet and thoughtful of you to take time to congratulate me. Of course, that's the Jan I have come to know.
Date: 2/14/2015 2:58:00 AM
Paul, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/20/2015 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. 30th place in one of your contests would be an honor. I'm looking forward to reading "50 shades."
Date: 1/16/2015 2:45:00 PM
Very creative. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/16/2015 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Ed. I suspect I'll get left in the dust, but I enjoyed writing it. Happy New Year to you and those you cherish.
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