Made Me Laugh

This guy declared I will knock
At your door even if I become a laughingstock.
I am thankful you live on the first floor
I don't want to cause an uproar
Or send you in to shock.
I feel we have interlocked.
I am like a male peacock
Declaring my love to whom I adore.
He declared I will knock
Furthermore according to my clock
I have been out here an hour waiting for you to 
Turn the lock.
I implore
You please to open the door.
Hello! There jock. Your girlfriend lives on the
Next block.
Why don't you go over there and knock.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Ha. good joke at the end there!~ I enjoyed this one, Bette.
Bavington  Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Hello Andrea, I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the visit. I hope you have a good evening.
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Interesting work. Good rhyming. Sara
Bavington  Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Thank you for the visit. I hope you have a great evening.
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