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you and i were the 'good kids' only spoke when spoken to never picked a fight didn't color outside the lines later we learned that they were sifting through all our art ascertaining who lay on the extremities of the bell curve who might have a troubled home life and/or who might have an aptitude for fine art ... we were somewhere in the middle fast forward thirty years or so... we discovered a magic quill that served as a machete clearing out the underbrush of this dense jungle we call life we learned to think outside the quadrilateral parallelogram and found the outer rim of that bell curve we no longer raised our hands waiting to be called on we delved deep and found a singular phenomenon inside us - our voice

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Date: 7/15/2023 12:47:00 PM
Merci!!!
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John Watt
Date: 7/15/2023 1:39:00 PM
je t'en prie!
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Michele Godleske
Date: 7/15/2023 12:48:00 PM
Beaucoup !!!
Date: 3/12/2020 10:41:00 PM
Cool ~ love how you start and end this poem... and the journey in between. really enjoyed this poem, John.
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John Watt
Date: 3/13/2020 12:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. It seems cliche, but I've been doing a lot of writing about writing lately. Glad to know this struck a resonant chord.
Date: 2/10/2020 2:44:00 AM
Your poem is so inspiring John. The passing years along with experience teaches us to use that voice! I love the way you have expressed that power which lies within us. Beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving first place! xxoo
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John Watt
Date: 2/11/2020 12:43:00 AM
Connie, this mean a lot coming from you. You have been a valued and consistent voice of encouragement to writers for many years. I hope to follow in your footsteps and encourage others to hear their inner voice and write what they hear. ~ John
Date: 2/9/2020 12:01:00 PM
congratulations on your first place win with this beauty.... hugs
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John Watt
Date: 2/9/2020 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for stopping by to read this one. As I mentioned to you earlier, free verse is a style in which I'm trying to grow. Hugs ~ John
Date: 2/8/2020 8:19:00 PM
Yes! Exactly!
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John Watt
Date: 2/8/2020 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Kim for your enthusiasm! Always nice to know you stopped by ~ John
Date: 2/8/2020 3:09:00 PM
Everything we do helps shape our personalities. I like the way you used math to show how they found the outer edges of the bell curve. Children want to be heard and you have given them a "voice." Beautifully penned, John! Best wishes, Carolyn
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John Watt
Date: 2/8/2020 7:58:00 PM
Carolyn, nice to hear from you again - thank you for the read and the thoughtful comment. Warmest regards ~ John
Date: 2/8/2020 12:57:00 PM
bravo! hope you get a win, john - very deserving of it!
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John Watt
Date: 2/8/2020 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene! Happy writing ~ John
Date: 2/7/2020 6:31:00 PM
FANTASTIC. Gotta fave it!!!
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John Watt
Date: 2/7/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thanks for the fave! This one means a lot to me.
Date: 2/7/2020 6:17:00 PM
John, This is very special. Love the metaphor and it takes courage to hear and listen to "our voice." Nice work!
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John Watt
Date: 2/7/2020 6:32:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words, Sam. I feel like writers need to be encouraged to find their voice and use it for good. With courage, as you say. Blessings ~ John
Date: 2/7/2020 6:14:00 PM
I first listen to the voice and I can see...Nice write...
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John Watt
Date: 2/7/2020 6:30:00 PM
Arturo, I'm grateful for your visit and your thoughtful comment. Peace ~ John

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