3rd in 4x4x4 Contest (Sponsor: Miranda Hawley)
Judged: January 30th, 2025
Chubs is gravely flat. We remove our hats. Her wheel deflated him— Chubs, my cuddly cat. Flounder is lying flat, ambling on his back. Her croutons choked him— Flounder, my friendly catfish. Gopher is resting back-flat, striking position for naps. Her diabolical chocolate gateau snuffed him out almost. Gopher rose once again, my mangy mutt, back-to-life. Ma decried; she'd die in a reindeer stampede
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