M V Fun

She divorced the sea and marries the sun;
She will soon come to the tryst,
Where she dispenses pleasure
To the tourists and local fun seekers.



User's   : Kayod5.
Contest : Impress me with a small poem.
Motif     : Epic
Sponsor : Giorgio V.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/1/2014 1:55:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem - a most intriguing one, particularly that first line! :)
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 3/1/2014 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte for the compliment,have a great weekend.
Date: 3/1/2014 12:52:00 AM
another congrats for you, my friend. You are becoming quite active here with the contests and all. Keep it up.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 3/1/2014 1:57:00 AM
Thank you Andrea,I'm only trying to put my foot where my friend says I should ,only trying to do that that you wish I do. Thanks for the watchful eyes,have a great weekend.
Date: 2/28/2014 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for visiting mine.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/28/2014 8:25:00 PM
Immense thanks for the compliment Gary,happy weekend.
Date: 2/28/2014 7:29:00 PM
This is quite a unique and interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it tonight! Great work, and congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
Immense thanks for the compliment Kelly,happy weekend.
Date: 2/28/2014 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Kayod5. -:) Verlena
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Date: 2/28/2014 6:38:00 PM
Immense thanks for the compliment Verlena,happy weekend.
Date: 2/28/2014 12:30:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Kayod5. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/28/2014 12:39:00 PM
Immense thanks for the compliment Anne,I'm glad you are always there for me; may the Lord reward you in folds.
Date: 2/28/2014 11:46:00 AM
Kayod5 CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/28/2014 12:16:00 PM
Immense thanks for the compliment Skat,happy weekend.
Date: 2/28/2014 8:52:00 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, kayod5
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/28/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Sir. Have a wonderful time.
Date: 2/11/2014 10:36:00 PM
this is a cute one, Kayode!! Is that your first name? Kayode?
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/11/2014 11:34:00 PM
Thanks for your reading and commendation;yes,Kayode is my first name. Stay blessed Andrea.
Date: 2/11/2014 6:34:00 AM
I loved where you took this write my friend! You are an awesome wielder of words Kayod5! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem here this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/11/2014 7:29:00 AM
I am highly elated ,may the Lord bless you Russell.
Date: 2/11/2014 2:37:00 AM
good day, Kayod5, sounds like fun. The best kind one can offer. Luv. Skat
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/11/2014 3:36:00 AM
I am so happy to read from you,thank you for your visit to my page. An old ship that can no longer go to sea;the owner converts her to floating shop where tourists and some locals go for relaxation in summer.Have a good time Skat.
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