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M O O N L I G H T - the Mirrored Tanka Style

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~ Moonlight ~ (The Mirrored Tanka) Moon in sky so bright With her heart embraces the night She dances in light Her graceful face shows thru clouds Bares it all high in the sky Bares it all high in the sky Her graceful face shows thru clouds She dances in light With her heart embraces the night Moon in sky so bright. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 October.17.2016 ~Authors Notes: The "Tanka" is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku.

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Candace Hodges

Date: 10/18/2016 8:04:00 PM

This poem reflects beauty and it reminds me how beautiful the moon is when it is full. This poem sounds so calm and graceful itbkind of makes me wanna dance in the light of the moon. A precious write. Beautifully written!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:46:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Candace, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Kenneth Allen

Date: 10/18/2016 4:09:00 PM

Loved the poem it is a reminder of a woman's true beauty her soul.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Kenneth, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2016 5:15:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it dear friend.Sending you my love n' prayers always.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/18/2016 4:10:00 AM

This beautiful Dorian! I am always mesmerized by the beautiful moon, your poem reflects this beauty. 7 ; )

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Connie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Elizabeth Babb

Date: 10/17/2016 10:43:00 PM

I loved Mirrored Moon! Beautiful imagery and a sweet, song-like rhythm to it. Very pretty!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Elizabeth, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Karen Edwards-Gregory

Date: 10/17/2016 8:03:00 PM

Like this sing song kinda poem....

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Karen, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D