Beautiful Mountains - the Choka Style

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~ Beautiful Mountains ~ ( Double Choka ) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 December.14.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Author's Notes : The " Choka " is a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2017 8:00:00 AM

Dorian, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2017 6:24:00 PM

I wish the same for you my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/24/2017 9:33:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Darlene , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my mountain poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! So very kind of you! I wish you and your family a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my friend!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Curtis Moorman

Date: 12/18/2017 4:57:00 AM

Great pictures --- even greater poem!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/24/2017 9:32:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Curtis , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my mountain poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! So very kind of you! I wish you and your family a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my friend!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D