M O U N T a I N S - the Choka Style

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~ Mountains ~ (Double Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 July.24.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Author's Notes : The " Choka " is a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/24/2017 3:49:00 PM

I love this poem Dorian.!! and I love the mountains. This reminds me of where I live and I am saving as a favorite. Thank you so much :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 4:07:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Heidi, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Choka Mountain poem.Deeply appreciated it , the fav and all!:))You're so kind.So happy you liked it ! Very lucky you living so close to very beautiful and precious mountains and nature!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D