Lying Eve

You pretend I'm Adam lying "Eve" My love songs all yours you believe Stalked me on Soup until I went away I'm hurt by the news you're back today Changed your name a hundred times But I can spot your kind of rhymes Cause most of them are copies of me And even my comments now all can see So I've got nothing to lose... to you Will TPS punish me if I prove it's true "Eve TMC".. you're a thief, you're a liar Your Soup Mail letter revealed sick desire On Poetry Hunter you take my writes Stealing my thoughts, it's not all right Plagiarism is a crime.. backstabbing "Eve" I'm exposing you if you don't leave ~Lyric Man Note: TPS may suspend me for calling "Eve" out, but she will not push me out of Soup again. She is one of two people who stalked me here and in my personal life. Just yesterday, "Eve TMC", cut and pasted my comments verbatim to one of Silent One's poems, "Shores Of Uncertainty" (both comments on page two). How does anyone steal comments and then post them to the same person? You got lazy "Eve" or you're pure crazy! I'm a nice guy and wish "Eve" no harm, but I'm going to protect those I love Fiercely! "Eve TMC" may disappear today but she'll be back tomorrow as someone else. She's had five or so names in the month I've been back.

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Tatiana Nde

Date: 7/28/2018 10:26:00 AM

Wow! Lyric Man. I had to go back on this poem specifically cause of the title. Also as well as the meaning of its attachment to today's happenings. Great work! Tatiana

Jenifer Jeyaseelan

Date: 7/14/2018 12:16:00 AM

I feel sorry for you and hope the stalker stops her stalk. : ( Your comments have always encouraged me and thanks for continuing on poetry soup! : )

Bob Taub

Date: 7/6/2018 8:20:00 PM

Reading this I feel your pain. I must say you have a lot of willpower the way you wrote and handled it. Well done!

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/29/2018 6:39:00 PM

Lyric Man my friend. Wrote a Poem called Avatar Troll inspired by your experience for you Bro. Read it over your morning cup of coffee hope you like it. cheers

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/29/2018 5:46:00 PM

I find this both funny and very very sad Lyric Man. Wish I had a stalker you must be a celebrity lol id take it as a compliment must have hit a nerve or be a slow day in Sad and Lonelyville. Just keep on writing and remember sticks and stones may break my bones but criticism will never deter me.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/29/2018 5:32:00 PM

Hi Lyric, i am sorry to read all this. How this can be happening to you i don't know. Your poem has not been disrespectful or damning so i wouldn't see Poetry soup saying anything to you. If they did i would be out of here for good this time, no break, gone for good. Why all this happens i have no idea. The comments show the support my friend, for what its worth you have mine also. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Shreastha Vyas

Date: 6/29/2018 1:44:00 PM

You are awesome poet

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/29/2018 7:17:00 AM

Geeze! It's sad to read about all this. I had no idea such things were happening. From what I've read of your poems, you are an amazing poet. I would think TPS would take care of such. I'm sorry you or anyone has to put up with this. Hope you stay... :)

Ronald Campbell

Date: 6/28/2018 8:55:00 AM

it took an minute to understand what it what you was saying, very good hidden truth, you said that im be a gifted writer, but that gift surly belong to you sir. thank you

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/28/2018 8:10:00 AM

I'm so sorry, and so stunned. Just, wow. xomo

James Horn

Date: 6/28/2018 8:02:00 AM

How in the world do you receive all of these responses. Sure glad I do not have to respond to all of them. You should have an automatic response that said "DITTO." Difficulty Is Too Trying Orally.

John Lawless

Date: 6/28/2018 7:42:00 AM

If PS suspends you it will be like the police arresting the person who called to warn them of a perpetrator on their grounds

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2018 5:49:00 AM

Wow! Poetry is so personal. I don’t know why someone finds the need to steal someone else’s. Blessing my friend! Glad you’ve stayed! ...Kim

Anil Deo

Date: 6/27/2018 9:37:00 PM

We shall overcome with One Consciousness, some called Jesus/God/LORD. You have been a fun person to know, and great to read ... but I can see how THE INTERNET SPACE allows more acting out from lonely, obsessive folks. We must also pray ... from afar off. Minds that obsees, churn the same thoughts PAST & FUTURE (rather than the NOW), open to being possessed by the "egoic mind" to quote a helpful "buddhist Teacher"

Donna Ahsinger

Date: 6/27/2018 9:00:00 PM

I'm sorry to hear of this LM. A person who has to go to that length to still someone else's poetry much cannot think of one themselves. There are all kinds of "cons" in this world. Don't let them stop you LM, you have a talent, they don't. Don't let these kind of people stop what you enjoy doing. Liars will be caught, so will thiefs , all crimes will be judged.....Donna

Bette Bavington

Date: 6/27/2018 6:30:00 PM

A cool way to let some one know your on to them. It's sad when people steal other people's stuff. Thank you again for the visit. Take care.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/27/2018 4:09:00 PM

I'm sorry you have to deal with this kind of abuse Dave. It is unconscionable for someone to steal another's words and even worse to be stalked. One time someone stole a haiku from me and then wrote me that it had won an award! Guess she forgot where she got it from! I did confront her but she claimed it was a coincidence. I hope this clever poem of yours makes Eve realize what she is doing. Best wishes, Connie xxoo

Marilyn S Jennings

Date: 6/27/2018 3:59:00 PM

Dear Lyric: Did someone do that to you? That is terrible! it was quite a write and gives us all something to think about. And, thank you for your comment on my God's Touch for New York. God bless, Marilyn

Mintra Mankasingh

Date: 6/27/2018 10:02:00 AM

That is just crazy, crazy as the world we live in. Nice pen on the situation. Hopefully ill will people will all go away sometime in this lifetime so that we may resume and tranquility.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/27/2018 9:33:00 AM

Thanks for the stop by, LM, always a pleasure to hear from you and your encouraging comments. As for your absence from Soup, I had no idea of the problem. Keep posting. Best to you. / M

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/27/2018 9:14:00 AM

Glad to see you are back, as for the other stuff it appears you have taken care of it...your poetry has been missed, there is a life to your poems...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2018 8:19:00 AM

I didn’t know why you left. I’m sorry to hear the circumstances. I have had my work plagerized on different occasions and posted on different websites and Facebook. It is very upsetting. You have friends here so don’t let anyone push you away.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 6/27/2018 7:10:00 AM

Hey Lyric Man......You have my support! Thanks for the info......If Eve comes my way she'll probably offer me an apple,,,LOL! You may be able to turn her BS into a poem or song....Title ideas....maybe "The Ink that stinks" or In the Steal of the Night.....perhaps " She's got a way with words, she got away with mine......

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2018 10:52:00 PM

I'm on your side, my friend. This is horrible. I don't think you'll be suspended either. You won't be either, if there's any justice in the world ... Then again, you have to wonder these days ... At any rate, please hang in there. You can see how much support you have on P.S Your P.S. friend, Gershon

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/26/2018 10:38:00 PM

Don't let this be the reason you leave again LM, you are so much better than someone trying to stir trouble. Least it's in the open now! Have a good week further ;)