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Lusting For Loveliness

Lust has betrayed me many times Opened me up in ways I had not imagined Very few times have I escaped her clutches Every time I say "Never again!" Lonely women seem to be my weakness I feel the pull of their longing hearts Not knowing if it is possible to resist Every molecule cries for their touch So I acquiesce to my addiction Seeking and wanting their loveliness Your wish is my command John. Note: fictional write Happily married 22 years!

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/2/2016 12:51:00 PM

Dropping by to say hi!! Didn't see a new one up. This is a great write. Lust can play havoc with a person's happiness. Hope all is well. Hugs

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/6/2016 1:40:00 PM

Outstanding lines that made me smile. God bless U and yours.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Iris.

Constance La France

Date: 2/29/2016 9:15:00 AM

Richard, wonderful write, happy to hear you are happily married, well my dad always said of me, she can find the loser in the crowd, and guess what he was right, until I met my husband, now there was a winner, sadly God liked him too and took him up to heaven, okay here it comes, I love this 7~ I have enjoyed reading your poems today but now I need to leave you, will be back to read more, I promise, promise, your friend Constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2016 8:19:00 AM

I enjoyed your visits Constance. Sorry to hear about your husband.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2016 5:17:00 PM

Lust can indeed betray..Its like a sugar-coated candy that cause the diabetees. Guess as human desire and lust are in our instinct,but thanks God we are blessed with reason.Awesome!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2016 7:12:00 PM

So true however many opt not to follow reason.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/23/2016 1:29:00 AM

Glad you added that last part lol. I was thinking, Oh my! An excellent acrostic on the theme though. Lovely, like always. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Susan.:0)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/23/2016 12:29:00 AM

Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/22/2016 5:27:00 PM

Nice 'loveliness' take on the theme, Richard. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2016 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Sandra.

Jean Murray

Date: 2/22/2016 1:34:00 PM

22 years you have lusted after your dream wife. Lucky you to have found true love. Congradulations on both counts.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2016 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Jean, I am indeed fortunate.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2016 1:07:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/22/2016 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Richard, you really threw me off with this one!I really liked a lot about this write, I knew it was from a skilled poet but the characters defect well... was not thinking it was you, then I saw the note and thought ...I wonder...great empathetic write, thanks for the entry!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2016 10:03:00 AM

Thanks John, I wanted to take the piece in the opposite direction of the norm in hopes it might stand apart. Thanks for adding it to the list.