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Luscious Love

Luscious Love Sweet serene surrender, your love a heaven splendor In all that is tender, I’ll be the receiver, you the sender Your love hath no bounds, with sensuous savory sounds Your cherished heart compounds, within my soul surrounds In delicious dreams compelling, my desire is over swelling In our yeasty youthful yelling, seductive screams are selling Our flesh adoringly afire, ascending aromas of lust perspire For our liquid love does inspire, sultry satin and lace for hire Bewitching and enticing, you are my cake with illicit icing I hunger for you’re spicing, nectar for the gods are sacrificing Sexual streams our appetite branded baring a bosom bite Euphoric ecstasy in moonlight, in sweet surrender of night. Sept.23.2017 The Poet's Fire Sponsored by/Gregory R Barden

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Date: 11/29/2017 7:48:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve describe everything so beautifully and I really enjoyed reading it
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Date: 10/8/2017 10:29:00 PM
Absolutely delicious!!! :) I didn't know that you could write sensual so well, WW. It's beautiful to the last drop.
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:05:00 PM
You had a word inside this poem that very well describes this to the tee: SULTRY!!! (and full of fire!)
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Date: 9/24/2017 9:01:00 AM
wow ^WW^ you pulled out all the stops with this sensual rhyme and I love the internal rhyme too its something I don't think I've tackled much in my simple poems:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:55:00 AM
Oh, that is one sensual write there my friend! I surely loved that, and I read it to my wife, she liked it too! I certainly was inspired by your tremendous poem here this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/24/2017 5:28:00 AM
You are the internal king, for every time you rhyme, your praise me sing...
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:07:00 AM
This also could easily be a lyric for a song, very passionate! This is very creative and original!
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Date: 9/23/2017 10:17:00 PM
Well, well, sensual and steamy!! I think that visit to the Ancient Caves sent you to all the right places WW? Only kidding. Your internal rhyme adds dynamics to your wonderful poetry as always. Loved it...Maria
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Date: 9/23/2017 11:14:00 PM
You found the perfect musical video clip. Complimented it perfectly - All the best in the contest ...Maria
Date: 9/23/2017 9:13:00 PM
Now you know what I'm going to say...it's getting rather boring at this point but...here goes...your internal rhymes get me every time, I just loved every word, the flow, just perfect, and sizzling just like Greg likes it. I think you have another winner!
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:49:00 PM
A steamy sensual delicacy of delights Winged Warrior. Intense imagery. Such a scrumptiously evocative poem of passionate romance. Good luck in the contest my friend! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 4:39:00 PM
wow, WW.. you set this page in flames... love the images and flow..huggs
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Date: 9/23/2017 2:58:00 PM
So many lovely lines--full of romance and fire--very well written--a sure win WW!
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Date: 9/23/2017 2:33:00 PM
"You are my cake with elicit icing" BEST LINE EVER! Awesome :) all the best xomo!
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