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Luscious Mango

luscious fruit of the tropics sphere-shaped, tapered, oval-faced beneath the sun dripping yellow; tangy as cocktail's zest for happy hour- kisses on lips that crave for its moist sweet marrow... peeled from its curved bodice; sucked juice trickles from its base-- adding lime, mint to freshen stem glasses that dangle and anchor the nape for a voluptuous treat of mild passion's heat: sliced, striped , tasted by love's scent—the pulp bits ooze—like varnished ochre mixed with light rhum and wine filling hungry vessels of tongues: the melting husk cooled by ice as wedges circle around to whip a luscious Mango Sangria drink! A fruit like this entices my own Summer delight, succulent as earth's nectar, relishing every drool of a caressed, early night's amber sensation. For Alcohol Contest: Sponsor Thvia Shetley Submitted 19/18/2107

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Date: 12/9/2017 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Nette - keep up the wonderful writing, my friend! :-)
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Date: 12/2/2017 1:15:00 AM
I’m suddenly thirsty. Well done and congrats on being medalist. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/27/2017 8:03:00 AM
Nette, this has got to be the most sensual serving of alcohol ever written. I'll just take it into a cold shower and chill.....
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Date: 11/26/2017 11:55:00 PM
Marvelous write, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:27:00 AM
nice win Nette ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/29/2014 11:50:00 PM
Nette, Wow, what an amazing entry and win for you with this yummy and sensuous fruit. BIG Congratulations! Very deserving win!
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Date: 4/26/2014 10:59:00 AM
MMMM visions of forbidden fruit spring to mind - a well deserved winner! Hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/26/2014 4:58:00 AM
Congrats for sharing this colorful poem, nette
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:30:00 AM
awesome win...Nette... PD
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Date: 4/25/2014 11:18:00 PM
Perfect Nette ,,, justice to the theme and the name of the poem,,, relished each word ,,congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:42:00 PM
Damn!! That's Good.
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:22:00 PM
I just knew THIS would be a huge success. BIG congrats on a well deserved win, Nette.
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Date: 4/25/2014 6:13:00 PM
Congrats nette. a well-deserved first place, !!
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:07:00 PM
congratulations on a well deserved win
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Date: 4/25/2014 4:32:00 PM
How could this not be #1 ;) Shades of Gray has nothing on this mouthwatering delight. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2014 4:14:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS NETTE.. :) detailed images so appealing and inviting :D, olive God bless.. :)
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:49:00 PM
Very colourful indeed since nature offers a wide variety of colours. Congrats on this well-deserved win!
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:38:00 PM
superb attention to detail, nette, and beautiful imagery..."a voluptuous season of wild forest heat" - wonderful! I could almost taste those yellows and golds - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your first place win... Verlena
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Date: 4/25/2014 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your first place :)! good job :)
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Date: 4/14/2014 7:51:00 AM
Succulent fruit made even more tasty by the images flowing from your pen.
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:59:00 AM
- Fresh - Good - Healthy!! - Eat fruit and be happy!! - A delicate poem Nette! - Happy Monday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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Date: 4/13/2014 6:59:00 PM
You describe this luscious fruit so eloquently nette...I must go to the produce market and search one out...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/13/2014 5:32:00 PM
I confess the title caught me, and the poem made me smile!!! Well done!
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Date: 4/13/2014 4:41:00 PM
wow, you sure proved it was luscious with these words. wonderful poem. Was it for the colorful verse contest? By the way, thanks for the placement in your stones contest. I really enjoyed reading all the winners just now. It was a very fun contest.
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