Luna's Lambent Sweep

Like a mourning dove, my lament is spilled
  I cry in grief as shadowed night grows cold
    Spirit crushed from love's promise, unfulfilled
      Burdensome sorrows in my heart unfold

Succumbed by tears,  I piteously weep
  In sullen thoughts and restless sleep, I dwell
    'cross the skies, Luna flies in lambent sweep
      With consoling hope, or my tolling knell?

On winds of change, I'd soar to zenith height
  With wings fanned in poetic volition
    Never again fearing a mawkish night
      No room for gloom, nor fear of perdition

My eyes long for benevolence anew
  Where the world is adorned in hues of blue




11~17~2020
Winds of Change
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Back with Congratulations on this wonderful win. "Beautiful" Have a Blessed day and New Year 2022.....................
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 10:00 AM
I appreciate your second visit very much, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Enjoy your win and day............
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 12:46 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:52 AM
I love this "...no room for gloom..." Jenna - brilliant sonnet! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Linda.
Kauffman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Beautiful images and phrasing, "spirit crushed from love's promise." This is so thoughtfully compased Jenna. Congratulations on your win.
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for mentioning a line you liked, Sam.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Beautiful, Jenna! Congratulations on first place!
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Thank you, Kim.
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November 29, 2020 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations Jenna, a beautiful sonnet, a worthy win... Belle
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Thanks a lot, Belle.
Y. Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Hi Jenna, Your use of words is extraordinary. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Alexis.
Watt Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Your extraordinary vocabulary talents are on full display with this amazing sonnet, Jenna. Well worded depiction of the sadness of lost love finding hope in the winds of change to see the world adorned in hues of blue. Congratulations on your well earned first place win ~ John
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:01 PM
I am honored by your kind comments and congratulations. Thank you, John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Another wonderful write Jenna, congrats on a fine win!
Logan Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:00 PM
John, I appreciate the honor of placing so highly in your contest. Thank you.
La France Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Jenna, this is truly beautiful _Constance
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Thank you very much, Constance.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Beautifully penned... graceful and fulfilling, a wish granted.. a inspiration. God bless you dear sweet lady
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Thank you for all of your kind thoughts, Regina.
Cunningham Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Quite an emotional verse tinged with sadness. You write these so well Jenna. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week going well. Tom
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Thank you very much, dear Tom. My week is better now...not such a good beginning, but today I can open both eyes!
Gondolf Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Very nicely penned, Jenna, you have much more emotion in yours than I have in mine. Best of luck for a win my friend. Hugs.
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Imagery of your emtotions touched me in your sonnet, John...ie: {whispered words holding a heart in sway} Words to sigh about. Thank you.
Brul Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Very beautiful dear Jenna. Your pen can tame the wind...Best wishes on the contest.
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 6:54 AM
A poet's pen that could tame the wind....Oh wouldn't that be something to write about, JCB? I'm truly appreciative of your kind thoughts. Thank you.
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