Barbara Mcguire Fiore Poet Alliteration

Luna Mutt Natalie's Pup

Luna Mutt Natalie’s Puppy


Little Luna licked a lot of lamb lollipops.
A lot of lamb lollipops little Luna licked.
If little Luna licked a lot of lamb lollipops, 
Where’s the lot of lamb lollipops little Luna licked?

Mama’s mutt makes many melodic muffled musings.
Many melodic muffled musings mama’s mutt makes.
If mama’s mutt makes many melodic muffled musings,
What are the many muffled musings mama’s mutt makes?

Natalie’s nipper nudges newfangled novelties.
Newfangled novelties Natalie’s nipper nudges.
If Natalie’s nipper nudges newfangled novelties,
Where’s the newfangled novelties Natalie’s nipper nudges?

Playful puppy perched on a purple platform. 
On a purple platform playful puppy perched.
If playful puppy perched on a purple platform,
Where’s the purple platform playful puppy perched on?

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Carol Mitra February 5, 2021 at 6:14 PM Such a fun write.. Congrats on your win Barbara :)) Barbara Mcguire Fiore September 4, 2023 at 6:00 AM Thanks so much Carol!

Constance La France February 5, 2021 at 3:47 PM Barbara, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance Barbara Mcguire Fiore September 4, 2023 at 6:01 AM It was fun to write - my daughter Natalie's dog is Luna! Thanks Constance.

Paula Goldsmith February 4, 2021 at 1:57 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun and cute write. Boy, you got my tongue dancing. Enjoy your win/day with blessings........................ Barbara Mcguire Fiore February 5, 2021 at 10:10 AM My daughter is visiting with Luna, her pup, so we had some fun laughs while I wrote it! Thanks

Jan Allison February 2, 2021 at 11:04 AM wow what awesome alliteration in a teasing tongue twister:-) what a fun poem Barbara:-) hugs jan xx Barbara Mcguire Fiore February 5, 2021 at 10:09 AM Thanks so much; it was fun to write!