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Luna Moth

Your beauty compells me to look closely I would love to see you fly mostly I've only seen you on the ground With death persuing you down There are shades of green Shades of cream Patterns that look like eyes that dream How lovely you must look in flight The flight you take must be at night After dreams fill my head instead One night I'll just stay awake to see If one luna moth looks down on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/12/2009 10:43:00 PM
This is pure beauty I loved it ... Jayne
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Date: 7/12/2009 1:12:00 PM
Moths are lovely creatures, but they ain't got a look in to the Butterfly, nice write Sara>>James
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Date: 7/11/2009 9:36:00 PM
A great muse it certainly is, nice work...Raul
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:58:00 PM
Hey this luna moth must be great to behold... wonderful rhymes, good piece you have miss Kendrick! Change the form from I do not know to verse. You are such a great poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Sara ! Adeleke
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:06:00 PM
during a full-moon in June, the moths come out of the trees at night, and fill the sky with magic flashes! great write! Sara
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