Luna Ascends

Sol bleeds at the edge of indigo skies, inking clouds scarlet, as He slowly dies; shadowing silhouettes in veiled disguise. As Luna ascends in regal splendor, a lone wolf's wails are mournfully tender; upturned jaws, implying its surrender. Howling summons the members of its clan, as it has done before the time of man; and it's not known how or why it began. Families stealthily hunt in the dark, and unlike packs of dogs, which yelp and bark; wolves, howl at the moon, before they embark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 26, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Nice effect. Nice rhyme scheme. Congrats on your well deserved win on the short list in this contest, Emile. ~ Gershon
Pinet Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. A well-written poem. Enjoyed.
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Emile, such wonderful imagery in your well-written poem written with excellent monorhyme-stanzas. Congrats on your placement! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Sandra, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.
Ward Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your poem's Honorable Mention in my contest, Emile. I particularly like the second stanza.
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thanks Julia, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.
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August 16, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Lovely, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.
Hopper Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Beautiful!
Pinet Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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August 13, 2018 at 3:46 AM
I really enjoyed this poem Émile and the triple rhymes worked effectively. It's still odd for a Brit to see the 'or' alternative to splendour etc but I appreciate that it's perfectly acceptable for the American target audience! Just 'regal' instead of 'regale' which has the sense of entertaining or amusing with talk/ entertainment etc. Best wishes Wendy
Pinet Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Wendy, once more you have captured an error and I remain so grateful for your support my friend, Emile.
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August 12, 2018 at 11:27 PM
You have captured the essence of a wolf pack, Emile. The words you choose so carefully always come together in a dance that tantalises and clarifies why I love poetry.
Pinet Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Caren, I welcome and appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
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