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Lullaby Series Iii

up on the moors, sweet love shadows dance at dusk. low across the purple shades wild ponies whinny and snuffle steam into brown grass while curlews cry the sun to rest.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2017 11:17:00 AM

The collection of the three lullabies presents a single romantic theme, Patricia. Very skillfully done w/artistic excellence. Pure poetry. Stellar bright write, my dear friend. Love and more love to you and yours.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 11:32:00 AM

You are so encouraging in your comments thank you. I wonder sometimes if my view of the world seems too airy fairy to most. It is what I see.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/30/2017 10:14:00 PM

Lovely lullaby. Beautiful imagery.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Line.

John Fleming

Date: 10/30/2017 9:09:00 PM

Reminds me exactly of Bodmin moor in Cornwall...oh how you would love that place, Patricia! With its rocky outcrops and huge granite tors, wide open space, the rushing winds and wild ponies -- your poem fits it like a glove! :) john

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/30/2017 6:48:00 PM

I love this one, Patricia. A lullaby scene, most certainly.